1 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2017 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is an amazing story, both in how it tells the story and how it treats the characters.
1 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2017 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is an amazing story, both in how it tells the story and how it treats the characters.
Date: November 02, 2017 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
In spite of zero dialogue and minimal physical contact, this story is amazingly sexy and moving. Wow!
Date: November 26, 2009 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2008 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sigh*
That last line is gorgeous.
Author's Response: Heh, I had to go back and read it again. Thanks, foreverdreaming! It's a kick to get reviews on older fics. :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2006 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. Can't believe I didn't leave a review (or rather, a valentine) last time I read this. Anyway, I love this. I love the moment when he discovers her bare ring finger. I love the last line.
And all the other lines. You so rock, Shan. Mistress of the short, sweet, and powerful.
Author's Response: Thanks, NEJ! I'm always gratified when folks like the spare language :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwww.
That image is gonna be stuck in my head for a while. Wet Jim. Hmm..
Author's Response: Awesome, glad it's a keeper :) Thanks, justy!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* you never cease to amaze me shan, nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks, sicokitty ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1
grinning like an idiot, yet again. this was adorable--loved the no dialogue ending. there are so many times when the JAM is so angsty & complicated, it's nice to have an easy happy scenario every once in a while :)
Author's Response:
You gotta have some fluff to balance the angst :) Thanks, yippee!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 12:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Eeeee! So awesome! Just what I needed before the week starts! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks, aggiegurl! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Niiiice.[/Kevin] I loved this!!
The lack of dialogue was beautifully done; what a lovely way to show how connected they are! And it also gave the story that hushed, still quality that an empty pool has, which was a nice touch.
And I loved loved loved Pam waiting for Jim to notice her ring was gone. Just imagining the look on his face when he realized it and looked up at her makes my heart melt, all hope and vulnerability and amazement. *smooshes Jim* *then smooshes Pam, for being so brave*
Wonderful job, as ever!
Author's Response: Thank you, Shroom! :)
7 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
perfectly done without a word spoken!
Author's Response: Thanks, Token! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! You're so awesome. Have nothing really constructive to say, but keep them coming!
Author's Response: Thanks, TV_Buffy! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely loved it. You certainly have a gift for this.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks, bitterpill ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Such a lovely silence. How I do love these lesson stories.
Author's Response: Thank you, Rose :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1
I love what you've done here, Shan! Not only do you have the whole sexy, wet thing going on, but Jim and Pam come to an agreement about their life together without saying a word. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks, Beth! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
That was wonderful. I like the scuba lesson between them.
Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona! :)
8 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
They need to talk, but they do so in signs. Cute.
Author's Response: Thanks, Gen :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1
This? Totally rocked. That Pam would think to seek Jim out in this way, and share her decision at the bottom of a pool was just awesome.
Author's Response: Hee, thanks, Luna! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I think I held my breath along with them. Very nice atmosphere here- the silence is a really great device. So much is always unspoken between them, anyway.
Author's Response:
I love what they can say without words. Thanks, nqllisi! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh that's just lovely.
Author's Response: Thanks, Krissy :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 05:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jen74! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the complete silence between them, when so much is being said. Very true to the show, and Reason #732 Why Jim Is Better.
Author's Response:
Jim IS better! That cannot be stressed enough. Thanks, Lissa_Maylee! ;)