8 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2008 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
"All he could think about was how he was so hers for the taking, should she choose to take. She hadn't."
This was beautiful and so very sad for Jim.
9 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2008 07:43 am Title: Chapter 7
Just read the last two. I hope you're inspired to write more. You're so good at capturing the tension and longing.
Author's Response: Thank's for reading! I f eel like I've always had an easier time writing Jim's side of the Jim & Pam story. And I like imaginng what it was like before the camera's.
9 [Report This]Date: January 07, 2008 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really enjoyed this chapter. I could envision this scene as it played out. Good job.
10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2008 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is amazing! In so few words you convey so much. And it's so wonderfully Jim.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Big Tuna. I have a much easier time writing Jim than any other character.
Date: December 26, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww what a nice surprise to see that you continued this. lovely and beautifully written-- just perfect. keep them coming!
9 [Report This]Date: December 25, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this. really nicely written, i love that last line :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2007 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
He stored this one certain thing along with the others
Aww. Things like her favorite flavor of yogurt, and the fact that she hates falsetto and pig-latin. A very vivid little slice of what makes them "them". Poignant and lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review nqlllsi!