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Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2008 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gods Ryan would make a sex tape with Kelly.  BWAH!!!  Uh, anyway, this was fantastic!  I've been missing your writing.  It was just a perfect mix of funny and sweet and who can't relate to being trapped in an airport?  And then the surprise ending!  I had no idea they were on their way to a destination wedding.  None.  Complete surprise.  But absolutely in character, too.

Author's Response:

Totally - well...I think he might not realize it at first...I'm thinking Kelly could be pretty stealthy. :)

I certainly can relate - I wrote this while I myself was trapped in one. :)

I am glad I surprised you.  I thought I was not fooling anyone. LOL!

I'm so glad you liked it.  I've been missing writing - and was so thankful I got something done.  It had been way too long.

 

 

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2008 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1

This was great!  Sorry for your delay, but glad for this reward for us.  So sweet and very them.  Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you bitterpill.  I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

::sigh:: This was the perfect antidote to my JKras carribean trauma of last week. lol. Love the idea of my JAM in the caribbean. How romantic...and the idea of Kelly doing her "impression" of Paris on video -- hilarious. 

Author's Response:

LOL!  You know - I wasn't even thinking about that.  I was trying to think of an actual place for it to happen and didn't want Jamaica and then my mind went blank.  I was desperate to post and just settled on the region instead. :)   So glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ugh, as someone who has once been stranded in Philadelphia's airport, I totally relate to this story. except mine wasn't as cool. We were actually stranded overnight after the air conditioning, back wheel, and some other random part broke down. We started loading, and only then did the police find some sort of weed on the ground of the airplane. Woo hoo. I got to take a 4 AM flight the next morning.

 Cute story, though! Love it!



Author's Response:

YIKES.  OK that was worse than my day for sure.  At least yours sounds interesting and amusing.  Probably didn't feel that way at the time I'm sure.  

I'm glad you liked the story!  Thanks for reading. :)  

Reviewer: tizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

As a frequent flyer out of Philly International it is with bitter memories that I relate to poor Pam with the cold and headache, been there many a time, however she has Jim so my sympathy ends there....very well done nice and fluffy.... :-)


Author's Response:

Yep.  That was me - except at LGA and not Philly...and without ya know...a tall lanky paper salesman. :)   I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay for new fanfic! :)  I'm sorry it took such a dire airport-stranding situation, but desperate times call for drastic measures. ;)  You've got such a good ear for dialogue; that was most entertaining.  Annoying bottle hitting, Kelly in her own naughty video, a marriage,... It's alll goood. [/Michael]

Author's Response: Thanks Miss MA.  I'm so glad you liked it!!!   I promise I'll finish Scott Land soon!!  I haven't forgotten - just wasn't happening.

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was the best airport delay ever!  The dialogue is to weep, xoxoxo.  So letter perfect and so much fun to read.  Hurray for unblockage!



Author's Response: Well I can't quite say that - but it was a good use of my time. :) You're very sweet - and  I'm so very glad you liked it.

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay! This was cute and fun. I hope it helped cure your writer's block. And I also hope you got the hell out of the airport!


Author's Response: Yay!  I'm glad you liked it.  I hope so too!!   And I did - FINALLY. 

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lovely, lovely, xoxoxo! I spent two hours in 23532-mile long lines at Logan Airport when I came home for Christmas. Too bad I didn't have a Jim to distract me!

Great job, and I'm so happy to read something new from you! Can't wait to see what you'll write next! -CH



Author's Response:

Thank you CH!!!  I've been through tons of delays - but this one today especially hurt.   Thank you for thinking it was great even when it was a god awful mess.   I was so scared I wouldn't post it at all if I didn't post it quickly.   We'll see what else I've got in me.

Hopefully soon!!!

Reviewer: jillyree Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Best use of an airport delay.  Ever.

Glad to hear that you're finally in the air! 



Author's Response: Aww thank you!!!  It took forever - but I finally got here.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, look at you, Ms. Sneaky I've Got Writer's Block. And with a surprise ending to boot. Just delectable. Rocking out Jim, half a Twizzler, Kelly Hilton...and my favorite: Jim as Pam's own personal Disney World (if I wasn't so prim and proper, I'd make a crack about the rides ;-) Welcome back, darlin'.

Author's Response:

Oh geez Colette.   Jim as Pam's own personal Disney World.  Now look where my minds gone.  Let's just think of your latest chapter as illustration of that fact now - shall we?   LOL!

Thank you.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think it was yesterday that I clicked your name to make sure I hadn't missed anything you'd written. I'm so happy you've found time to return! YAY! And with going-to-get-married fluff! Woohoo! This is perfectly sweet. I love their connection, and how certain Pam finally is here. It's about time!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it - even if it was in pitiful shape when I first posted.   It's about time indeed!!  Thanks lis - as always. 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a coincidence!  I was just at Target and saw some cute Valentine's Day things out, one of which was a 4  or 5" high silver/chrome "XOXO" which brought you to mind even though it's missing an "XO".  Then I log in when I get home and voila - a new story! 

And I loved this line - "It didn't matter as long as at the end of the ceremony she walked away with him."



Author's Response: LOL!  It was a sign dearest kaystar!   So glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

The block is dead!  The block is dead!  Surely one of the greatest uses of airport down time ever.  I was so excited to see you had posted and grinned my way through the whole story.  Per your usual, the scene is vivid and their voices perfect.  Well done.     

Author's Response:

Well see - there was this guy who said something like..."C'mon.  You don't have some sort of affliction keeping you from writing."   It was kind of like Chinese water torture.  

Except - you know...without the Chinese - or the water.   I had to make it stop. :)

PS:  It looks better now if you wanted to see it without a typo every other sentence.

And thank you. :)

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can see all of this so perfectly - great job. It's fluff as you said, but also feels very "slice o' life." Always glad to see a story from you!

Author's Response: I'm so glad.  Trust me - it felt real as I was writing it. :)  Well.  The delayed part felt real.  I had annoying people (and not adorably annoying people at that) all around me.    Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay for you!  Feel good to write again?

(p.s. We were in Mexico for Christmas, and an Alaska Airlines plane landed that was painted with Disney characters - it said, "We're going to Disney World!" on the side.  All I could think was, Now there's a plane load of disappointed kids!)



Author's Response:

Thanks!!   It did - so much so I couldn't bear to look at it too much before I posted.  OBVIOUSLY.   It's prettier now - if you'd care to reread.

OUCH.  Poor kiddies!

Reviewer: Abigail Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story..much needed JAM during the drought.  Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks Abigail!!!  You're very welcome.  Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa, I was kidding about the Hot & Sour soup and the Puffs Plus -- I hope Pam gets good use out of them and is well enough to uh, not get much sun on their weekend getaway.

Feel better!  <3<3<3 



Author's Response:

Yeah.  I know.  But it kinda worked didn't it?   LOL!   I'm confident Pam is going to have a quick recovery - don't you worry about her.

Thanks so much for the well wishes.  

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww, that was so great.  You incorporated all those prompts so nicely too!  I guess something good can come from a shitty day at LaGuardia.  Hope you have a nice trip, hugs, and a safe return!

Author's Response: A shitty day indeed.  And I can't say anything about my trip was NICE but I do know this.  The law of averages says I have to get a day like this ever so often.   I travel a ton and am usually pretty lucky.  Now about that Berlin Wall fic.... :P

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1

So fabulous! Why can't I have a Jim to distract me with fabulous thoughts when I'm stuck at the airport?!

Author's Response: Why thank you!  And you can - just write about him while you are there. ;)  Of course - Pam has it better than both of us. 

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1

airports seem to serve you well :) great dialogue and the part about Kelly was so funny! Too bad I'm reading this at the 'Bucks, because I have to stiffle my giggles. Have great flight!

Author's Response: Don't hold back secondrink - just go right ahead and lol.  I can't say the flight was great - but I got here at least. :)   Thanks so much!

Reviewer: sorano916 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww... adorable! And you were able to work in the broken VCR... in a rather interesting way. :D Kudos to you... heh...

Author's Response: Yeah that one was a toughy - but I'm glad you thought it worked. :)   Thanks for keeping me entertained during the torture - and for that yummy drink recipe. :)

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Your delay is our gain!  You rock, and so does this story!  Hope your flight leaves soon :)  

Author's Response: Well I'm glad something was gained from it.   Awww.  Thank you!!!  My original flight never at all - but I'm scrappy so I made it.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2008 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, you definitely should start hanging out at airports when you need to break that writer's block.  That was awesome, K.  :)

Author's Response:

Well - not exactly awesome but thank you.   You should go back and read it now - without the half finished thoughts and the typos.   :)

And I hang out in airports plenty - it doesn't always work.

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