1 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2018 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this one so much! So many fics are Jim jim jim and conveniently forget about the pain, struggles, and breakthroughs pam went through. Thank you for this!
Also, this...
“Come on, Pam. There’s no way you didn’t know. Everyone else did. It wasn’t easy to find a way to say it. And I was never that kind of guy. I wasn’t the guy friends needed to worry about when it came to their girlfriends, and you were someone’s fiancee!”
So true... and yet he expected her to be that girl.
10 [Report This]Date: June 21, 2009 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This was a great one-shot of how Jim and Pam talked about moving in together. I loved that you included the unresolved issues between them that spilled out in the course of their argument because I can see how they might have avoided those issues when they first got together. And the ending was just perfect. Great, great job!
Date: February 23, 2008 01:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Another great story...realistic dialog, I love when Pam and Jim fight and deal with their issues. Haha. Aww and she showed up the next night with the first box!! So precious! =)
Date: January 10, 2008 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was great! I was so tense just reading their fight. You did a great job writing this.
Date: January 09, 2008 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
i loved this. Almost the entire dialogue seems like it would fit right in with the show-- Jim and Pam were captured just right. The ending put a huge smile on my face. Nicely done! :)
8 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2008 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
"She boldly admitted everything in front of the entire office – including Karen, and though he hadn’t taken as long as she did with Roy, he still took his time ending that relationship."
I think this is the only time I've seen this addressed before - after Pam's confession during BG, I was surprised to see he and Karen still together and going to NY early together in TJ. This was good - its easy to see where they're both sensitive to pauses and hesitations.
9 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2008 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute! It must be something in the air - I've got Jam moving in together on my mind, too.... :-)
Date: January 08, 2008 09:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Really liked this; I think this is exactly the kind of "angst" they might go through. I guess I see Jim the same way you do...I think he is likely to be easily slighted and quick to take the slightest hesitancy on Pam's part very hard, and that this could cause problems for them. Also I like the way that the shadows of the past sort of get them here, I think that is realistic.
If I can offer a slight criticism...Pam is having an emotional, intense conversation here; I don't think she would be quite as articulate as you make her.
Please keep writing, I enjoy your work.
10 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2008 07:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely fantastic. You had me near tears at one point (“Come on, Pam. There’s no way you didn’t know. Everyone else did...It wasn’t easy to find a way to say it. And I was never that kind of guy. I wasn’t the guy friends needed to worry about when it came to their girlfriends...") So well done.
Date: January 08, 2008 06:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it, you hit it perfectly what it would have been like. I loved seeing how they worked through that issue. Great story.
Date: January 07, 2008 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was adorable. Perfect mix of Jam serious talk and banter. Thanks for writing. :D
Date: January 07, 2008 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! The voices were perfect, I could totally hear it in my head. I love fluff but sometimes it's nice to hear them work out some Casino Night/Stamford issues. Looking forward to your next story!
9 [Report This]Date: January 07, 2008 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it love it love it! Such a wonderfully realistic take on their potential first fight. I have to admit, I've had similar ideas float through my head...I'm intrigued by what Jim and Pam would really fight about. But I think you've nailed it here.
Nicely done Strawberry Fields...I can't wait to read more of your work in the future!
Date: January 07, 2008 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Pam's tag line just OWNS!