1 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2020 07:43 pm Title: Karen: Left Crying By A Fountain In New York City
Now, this is the height of irony - by these standards, his breakup with Karen is actually conducted with relative decency.
I guess he'll never really learn.
1 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2020 07:40 pm Title: Brenda: Never Called Her Back After Being Jinxed
Oh, Jim. He's still my boy... but this feels remarkably in character for a guy we're supposed to like.
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2009 02:33 am Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
That was really extremely good. :)
I really love the title of chapter 3. Hahah. And the ending is great.
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2009 04:58 pm Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
I loved everything about this story. It was extremely clever of you to write a backstory for Jim who, as we've seen on the show, broke up with two different women in two terrible ways. It's hard to pick which was the worst case because all were very horrible for the girls that Jim broke up with. But probably the one where he accidentally cheated on the girl.
The ending was so perfect, Jim and Pam happy with their daughter and of course, the happily ever after. Excellent job!
10 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2009 09:29 pm Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
Okay, so this whole thing was so great, so Jim, so realistic. And this last chapter was absolute perfection. Everything about it. Everything.
Amazing, amazing work!
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2008 08:40 pm Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
AWWWWWW! Adorable ending. This was a great concept for a story, and I really enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 03:11 pm Title: Sandy: At Her Graduation Party In Front Of All Her Friends
I registered at this site (which I've been reading enthusiastically for at least 6 months) just so I could tell you how much I loved this story. I don't think this Jim is a jackasass-- I think he's utterly human. The last two chapters are perfect, and as someone who always rooted for JAM but never hated Karen, I think this is the best version of Jim breaking up with Karen I've yet read. its certainly the only one that's made me feel like I need to tell the author how great it is. thanks for this story, and please keep writing!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!
Date: February 19, 2008 12:54 pm Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
Very nicely done. As long as he stays with Pam I don't care how he broke up with the others.:)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: February 19, 2008 11:52 am Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
This was great...each part was really apt, but I especially liked the Brenda one (I liked that he was self-aware enough to be embarrassed by his motives and how half-assed he was) and the Karen break-up scene was pretty much exactly how I imagined it happening. Lovely epilogue too...very clever.
Date: February 19, 2008 11:38 am Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
Aww! I love how you worked in how Jim doesn't want a guy just like him for his little girl. He just needed the right girl.
Now that he does have the right girl, we need to get back to that dammit! Will April 10th just get here already?
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 11:30 am Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
Awwwwww! I love it. Way to ride off into the sunset!
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 11:13 am Title: Pam: Lived Happily Ever After
What a great ending to an awesome explication of Jim's past. Bravo!
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 05:37 am Title: Brenda: Never Called Her Back After Being Jinxed
Oh my goodness! Jim...is kind of an asshole. That was great, EG : )
Date: February 18, 2008 08:57 pm Title: Brenda: Never Called Her Back After Being Jinxed
Oh yowsa, it does get worse for Jim. How do you do it?
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 07:52 pm Title: Brenda: Never Called Her Back After Being Jinxed
Be still my heat, twice in one night? Bless you. I completely forgot Brenda. Jim has a nasty habit of running into ex's awkwardly, doesn't he. Can't wait to read about the next one to get the ax. Love this story. Love short fragment sentences, too, apparently.
Date: February 18, 2008 06:35 pm Title: Katy: On A Boat, With No Hope Of Escape
Oh, Jim, you just keep digging yourself in deeper and deeper, don't you? Good thing you won't have to do that 'breaking up' thing anymore after Karen.
Date: February 18, 2008 02:42 pm Title: Katy: On A Boat, With No Hope Of Escape
That last part is AWESOME. "He isn't that guy, the boat guy, is he?"
Awesome, awkward--just great.
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 02:41 pm Title: Katy: On A Boat, With No Hope Of Escape
Lol, the ending killed me. I adore your Jim, crappy breaker upper and all. Oh man, I'm still laughing.
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 02:22 pm Title: Katy: On A Boat, With No Hope Of Escape
Awesome : )
Date: January 18, 2008 12:18 pm Title: Denise: Called "Pam" In A Moment Of Intimacy
Oh God, Jim. Worst mistake ever. You've got a really good story. It's so interesting to see how Jim might have handled other relationships.
Date: January 17, 2008 12:30 am Title: Denise: Called "Pam" In A Moment Of Intimacy
Jim Jim Jim Jim Jim Jim Jim </kevin>
poor guy, at least we know he gets it right eventually. This is wildly entertaining :)
Date: January 15, 2008 10:28 pm Title: Denise: Called "Pam" In A Moment Of Intimacy
Just seeing the title of part 3 made me laugh. Bwa ha ha ha.
Date: January 15, 2008 09:14 pm Title: Sandy: At Her Graduation Party In Front Of All Her Friends
Great story. I feel really bad for Jim in some respects his luck with the ladies is just bad.
But you do make him seem just like a regular guy. Not some douche bag or sissy, just a guy who goes through life and sometimes makes mistakes.
The last chapter saying the wrong name was brilliant. It happened to me (I was the 'Jim' in the situation).
Can't wait for more
10 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2008 06:40 pm Title: Sandy: At Her Graduation Party In Front Of All Her Friends
I'm really enjoying these. It's a cool concept-- because it shows the side of Jim that still needs a little work :) Great job, I look forward to more!
Date: January 14, 2008 12:35 pm Title: Kathryn: Accidentally Cheated On
Idiot. You're not supposed to tell! (Well, you brag to your friends but that's different)