10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2006 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
This was great. It made me feel a little sick to my stomach, but still great. It's nice to see Roy do the leaving for a change.
I think my favourite part was: He let out a bark of a laugh that cracked in the small room like a gunshot.
Because that's exactly what I did. Of course he left her for Katy. Poor Pam. You snooze, you lose, I guess.
Anyway, very well done.
Cheers
Date: September 08, 2006 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
When Pam is being completely oblivious I ALMOST wish it would happen this way. Almost...
8 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 05:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Then he comes back, dates a new girl (Jan, Kelly, even Angela?) and we see some real Pam angst!
8 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
But then he comes back and they fall in love.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, of course. Totally.
Erm...yeah.
Thanks for the comment!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh how heartbreaking. But really not unrealistic to what could happen (which scares the crap out of me!) Very nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeee-ouch! So sad, but well-done.
(Though I did get a giggle in the middle with the "lesser Baldwin.")
Author's Response:
I'm glad I'm not the only one amused by that.
Thanks so much for your comments!
8 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Jim. There really is only so much he can take.
Author's Response:
I know. My heart, it breaks for him.
Thanks for your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 10:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Ouch. Not unrealistic however even though in my mind I think Jim would give Pam a little more time. Great first fic. Can't wait to see more from you.
Author's Response:
In my mind, this moment was just too much for him to handle and he lost all patience with her. Maybe upon further reflection he'd feel differently.
Thanks so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Owie. ::whimper:: Okay, bitter and ironic and sad, oh my! Very angsty yet vivid for your first fic. Nice job. :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great story, except the end, of course. But then again, she was free for the wrong reason. Poor Jim. This was a perfect line:
(Hung the moon? Pam thought. Since when does Roy say things like ‘hung the moon’?)
Author's Response:
Honestly, the whole story was born from that line alone.
Strange, but true.
Thanks so much for you comments!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was sad. Let's hope it doesn't happen.
Author's Response:
I've got my fingers crossed as I write.
Makes typing a little complicated.
Thank you for your comments!
Date: September 05, 2006 04:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Yipes, I could totally see this happening. You had heir voices down really well and the ending...I gasped out loud. So so sad, but in that good angsty way :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
9 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 03:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, yeah, that about killed me. It's so very possible, too, that it's a little bit haunting. Excellent job on the characterization.
Author's Response:
Heh. Death by fanfic.
That's how I wanna go.
Thank you so much for your review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1
What!? No!! Oh Jim, come back!!! Though this was really heartbreaking, I really liked it. I hope you write more Office fics!
9 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 01:53 am Title: Chapter 1
*cries*
Seriously, though, this probably could happen. I really hope it doesn't, but it could. Great job with the angst and breaking my heart!