Date: February 08, 2008 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was gorgeously written. =)
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2008 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1
You like that tears can paint colors and lies can breed truth and bitterness can taste sweet on your tongue when you let it age somewhere underground and you like that chaos can all make sense in the end.
This is beautiful, powerful imagery. I think that the road behind them has led them to where they are now and where they will be going, and I like that Pam can make that idea tangible in the destruction and re-invention of her art. Lovely work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! They've certainly come a long way.
Date: January 21, 2008 10:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This was truly amazing. I love the idea of Future Strong Pam attacking her weak early art and changing it and making it something more. I've never read anything remotely like it before. And excellent use of the second person. Very effective.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always a thrill to hear that I've done something original.
10 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
You continue to amaze me. Seriously. Your stories are all beautifully written and this was no exception.
Author's Response: I'm definitely blushing now! I'm so happy you enjoy reading my writing because I really have a blast writing in this fandom.
8 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2008 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
"You like that tears can paint colors and lies can breed truth and bitterness can taste sweet on your tongue when you let it age somewhere underground and you like that chaos can all make sense in the end."
Beautiful story. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: January 20, 2008 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like reading stories about how Pam's artwork is used as a metaphor for her growth. I can't believe she still had those old watercolors up after ten years. Time for a change, Pam. Good job!
Author's Response: I imagine not all of Pam morphed into FNB right away. There are probably some scraps of insecurity left over. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 19, 2008 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Because you like the feeling of a million little missteps and coincidences and painful choices leading to a pair of heart-muscle straps and whispered truths and laughter condensed into an apothecary bottle.
Absolutely loved this sentence! It really captures Pam wanting everything that's happened to mean something in the end. Excellent fic.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think in this case the ends kind of justify the means.