Date: December 30, 2010 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is awesome. Feels like a deleted scene. And this made me laugh out loud:
"I promise I won't get mad. How much worse could it be than when he said he wanted to spray on Pam?"
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2006 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my gosh!!!! super good!!! i really love this one!!! great job!! =)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2006 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh...this makes the skiing comment in The Carpet much sadder. I really like the way this could fit in perfectly with the show.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
8 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice, Willow. I like pushyPam ;)
Also, for some reason, it never occurred to me that her Poconos trip was after finding out about the crush. I think you may have inspired a fic :D Thanks!
Author's Response:
Yay! I love everything you write so I hope I did inspire something :) Thank you :)
Date: September 07, 2006 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story makes me want to befriend Pam - but I think you've captured her pretty well here
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like Bold!Pam, but I feel sad for her insecure side. If only she knew why Jim had dated Katy.
Author's Response: Yes, her insecurity is the only reason I see for her not realizing what Jim feels for her.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I never thought how Pam would have noticed both how pretty Katy was AND how Katy and Jim had nothing in common. Interesting....
"I don't know, but I am picturing he said something stupid before the rest of the bra could come off."
Hee!
Well done, Mizz Willow!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
"I think you are beautiful." Gah. Jim is so romantic and how sweet that he closed her jacket after she so boldly opened it for his opinion.
Author's Response:
I like that Jim won't let her stoop to that level with him.
9 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think you are right on the money in that Pam is that insecure. I think she doesn't quite believe Jim could be in love with her or at least, somehow thinks she doesn't deserve it. I loved their interactions in this story. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you :) You just worded it perfectly. Pam doesn't think she deserves it. I have always gotten the impression that Pam thinks she should be grateful Roy wants to be with her when it is clearly the other way around.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
There are some great lines in here. "Spray on Pam," (and Pam having to watch Saw not to think about it) and, "...I am picturing he said something stupid before the rest of the bra could come off." HAHAHA, I love Michael bits, even when he's not in it.
Also: Pam opening her jacket? Wow.
This was a really interesting story... I liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I must confess to stealing and changing the "spray on Pam" line from a deleted Pilot scene.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Pam. She has such a strange mix of feeling insecure & enjoying her power over Jim--I think you got her perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you. I think the only way Pam could NOT see that Jim is in love with her is her own insecurity. At the same time though I think she taunts him to see if there is a sign that he could look at her that way--torturing Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Pam. She has such a strange mix of feeling insecure & enjoying her power over Jim--I think you got her perfectly.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Very well done. Loved it.
Date: September 07, 2006 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Pam, who just doesn't get it. She has no idea how much she hurts him, or how much he loves her just exactly how she is.
Date: September 07, 2006 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I can really imagine this is how Roy and Pam would both think about these things. Nice job!