Reviews For Trouble Breathing
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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2020 11:50 pm Title: The Wedding That Wasn't

Couple things I really liked about this:

You correctly identifying a BIG part of Pam's thinking about the wedding which I think goes unrecognized, which is that she believes the wedding will change things with her and Roy and hasn't really thought through how.

And I love the idea of Jim sticking around for one final shot before leaving.

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2012 12:49 am Title: The Wedding That Wasn't

I've been reading all your stories tonight, and I really like the twists you imagined for all of them. I had a great time reading all of them. Thanks!

Reviewer: MrsHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2006 09:33 am Title: The Wedding That Wasn't

incredible. i love it. it really makes sense that pam would realize at the very last minute that she can't marry roy. again, incredable! =)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 09:22 am Title: The Wedding That Wasn't

Yay!  I love this--wouldn't it be lovely if that happened?  I feel like Jim would try one last time, too, because he really is that desperate.

Author's Response: I think he would try one last time, because he's really that in love with her. And I kind of think he would feel like he owes it to Pam too. "You gotta take a chance on something sometime, Pam." Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 05:49 am Title: The Wedding That Wasn't

Awwwww! Nice. I loved how Roy left and Jim stayed the whole time.

Author's Response: You know he would! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 05:30 am Title: The Wedding That Wasn't

awww. so like pam to be completely in denial...until something happens to physically shake her out of it!

Author's Response: Hee. I could totally just see her freezing up right before she walked down the aisle. That would be interesting. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 03:34 am Title: The Wedding That Wasn't

That description scared me- I thought Pam was dying. Very well done! And of course Jim is there- he's nearly perfect, after all.

Author's Response: Nearly, but not quite, which is how I like them. Hee. Glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2006 08:26 pm Title: The Wedding That Wasn't

Beautiful.

Author's Response: Aww thank you!

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