Date: August 18, 2023 08:40 am Title: Coda
One of my favourites
Date: April 19, 2021 05:01 pm Title: Silence
Whooo boy! I had to come back and read chapter 1 again! 😳d84;a039;🔥d84;a039;
Date: February 14, 2021 06:39 am Title: Silence
Very Nice...
Date: August 15, 2018 05:48 pm Title: Accelerando
Interesting
Date: July 28, 2018 08:18 am Title: Coda
Great ending!
Date: July 28, 2018 07:35 am Title: Obbligato
Oh my god. I’m dead. Aye aye aye.
Date: July 28, 2018 07:24 am Title: Rubato
I am tickled at the scene with Michael. It was PERFECTION!
Date: July 28, 2018 07:06 am Title: Counterpoint
I’m a big Karen-fan, just not with Jim. I have a lot of head canon that Pam and Karen eventually become friends. So I kind of squirmed when you had Karen elevating herself above Pam and portraying Pam as just a plain receptionist. But it was actually realistic and so in-character. Of course she needs to give herself a pep talk after what she walked in on!! Good call on that angle, but really just great work on where you take Karen in this chapter.
Date: July 28, 2018 06:08 am Title: Silence
Woooooowwwwww! I’m hooked!
Date: May 29, 2018 10:48 pm Title: Silence
I literally jumped out of bed when I saw the next line that Karen found them. This is really good so far.
Date: August 06, 2009 04:16 pm Title: Coda
Fab ending. Thanks for such an amazing story!
Date: August 06, 2009 04:01 pm Title: Deceptive Cadence
So hot and delicious!
Date: August 06, 2009 08:42 am Title: Fugue
I don't know who I feel sorrier for :) So amazing!
Date: August 05, 2009 10:11 pm Title: Obbligato
Pam noooooooooo omg, my heart cannot take this lol.
Date: August 05, 2009 09:53 pm Title: Rubato
So intense and delicious!
Date: August 05, 2009 09:24 pm Title: Counterpoint
This is addictive, I wish Karen would talk to him ahh!
Date: August 05, 2009 08:57 pm Title: Accelerando
Love how you mixed the banter with the serious stuff, so perfect!
Date: August 05, 2009 08:27 pm Title: Pianissimo
“You said you left with Roy because I didn't want you.” He kissed her again, this time ever so gently. “But I did. Believe me, I did."
THAT RIGHT THERE IS MADE OF AWESOME!
Date: August 05, 2009 08:04 pm Title: Silence
How have I never read this. I am hooked.... I can't believe Karen walked in on them... ahhh :)
Date: November 11, 2008 09:28 am Title: Coda
yay rah i love it! write more!
Date: July 23, 2008 05:49 pm Title: Coda
This was really lovely. Well done.
Date: July 21, 2008 09:58 pm Title: Silence
Wow. Just wow. Great angry/hurt!Pam... and liked the way you had her express why she left w/Roy.
And you wrote Karen in well, I could totally see her reacting that way. I am SO glad this story is completed ;)
Date: April 29, 2008 10:58 am Title: Coda
Awww. Their zero anniversary! That brought tears to my eyes! I loved the imagery of Pam sneaking around in the dark, trying to be quiet but hoping that she wasn't.
Date: April 25, 2008 09:33 am Title: Coda
Best chapter titles EVER. Loved loved loved it.
Date: April 21, 2008 03:51 pm Title: Coda
wow. that was great, (: amazing job on ending this story !