Date: August 06, 2008 10:30 am Title: Introduction
You had me hanging on the edge of my seat! Very suspensfull story and really really writing.
[I knew it was Toby all along :]
Author's Response: Awesome, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: July 29, 2008 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
OH MY GOD I WAS RIGHT THE FIRST TIME. So, yes, I'm gullible and you had me thinking it was Andy. BUT I HAD IT RIGHT THE FIRST TIME!!!! This was an amazing story. Horrible, just...horrible, but amazing. And I LOVE DWIGHT. I don't think I'll ever look at Toby the same way again...awesome, awesome job. So amazing. Great. Wow.
Author's Response:
You were supposed to think it was Andy!! I'm glad I suckered you in. ;)
Thanks for reading, and reviewing!
Date: July 29, 2008 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh my god, oh my god. Its ANDY. THE DIPLOMA ON THE WALL! How did I miss him...? Oh god. Oh god.
Date: July 29, 2008 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow wow okay...my guess is Toby. I mean, its not Roy, obviously...I mean, I really really don't think its Dwight. Or Michael...or Stanley. Maybe Creed...but no...not Creed. Ahhh, this is freaking me out. BUT I MUST KEEP READING. (Sorry for all the ...'s.)
Date: February 28, 2008 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
I knew it was Toby. I have mixed feelings about this story. It's a little too graphic for me, and MTT I think, but it was well written nonetheless.
Author's Response: That's why I rated it MA I didn't want anyone to get the impression that lines wouldn't or couldn't be crossed.
Date: February 25, 2008 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
Kidnapping? What kind of awful person would write such a thing?
Author's Response: You? No? ;)
Date: February 25, 2008 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
I seriously thought it was Ryan for the longest time! You totally kept me off the trail. Nicely done!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I actually had a few moments in the early chapters where I was going to lean toward using Ryan as the bait, but I figured that would be too difficult with him in NYC, so I used Andy.
Thanks for reading! :)
9 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2008 10:46 am Title: Chapter 9
I had a little thought it might be Toby, but nothing serious. I thought Roy, then Toby, then Andy (of course), back to Toby. Hmm. Great work! I loved this!
Author's Response: Well I'm glad to keep you guessing, thanks for reading along. :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2008 06:54 am Title: Chapter 9
I loved this so much, I am always into these kind of fics. I knew it was Toby, but for a bit there thought it really could've been Andy. Great job.
I hope you do a follow up story on this and what happened after, etc.
Author's Response:
I already have an idea to the next installment I just have to work out some kinks to make sure it will actually work. I'm glad I was able to throw you off with Andy, even if just for a moment.
Thanks for reading! :)
Date: February 25, 2008 06:28 am Title: Chapter 9
oh my gosh...great job...just read it all and loved it...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it. :)
8 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2008 06:08 am Title: Chapter 9
I knew it was Toby from the beginning, but it was still a good read.
Author's Response: Of course it was Toby, I mean come on the guy has some sort of crazy jealous thing going on lately. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: February 25, 2008 05:43 am Title: Chapter 9
ooh yay. I thought it might've been Toby too. But I wasn't ever really sure, so good! Great suspense and action here and at least Dwight's craziness about guns and whatnot are finally put to good use :) haha
Great job, dmscranton, I loved it!
Author's Response:
Well Dwight did promise Michael to take care of Jim, and he takes his orders so seriously.
Thanks for reading! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it.
Date: February 25, 2008 12:09 am Title: Chapter 9
I thought it was Toby. You kind of threw me when you had Jim gunning after Andy for a second. Intense.
Author's Response: I was hoping to throw you! Thanks for reading. :)
Date: February 24, 2008 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
oooh hope in the form of a cell phone!
Poor Jim. he doesn't even have the energy to mess with Dwight. :(
Gah. I cannot wait to see what happens.
Author's Response:
I cannot wait for you to see!
I'm so happy people are liking this, and I'm glad you're reviewing! :)
Date: February 24, 2008 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Gah. dmscranton al these updates and amazing chapters are breaking me down! I can't wait to see what happens. And to figure out who is doing this! I have an idea but... who knows! ;) Lovely, lovely job!
Author's Response: I know it's crazy! I'm just totally on a roll. I don't know where the muse hit me but I'm happy about it.
Date: February 24, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
oh my godddddddd. i love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! *blush* :) (wanna know a secret? I'm totally loving it too)
Date: February 24, 2008 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
IT'S SO TOBY! And this is getting really good and sad. I love it, though.
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'm totally enjoying writing it!
10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2008 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm writing a paper for school right now, do you think there is any way you could send some of that writing surge my way. I have been staring at my computer and checking MTT all day. Lol!
This chapter was very suspenseful for Jim and Pam. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: Ha! If I could share I would. :) I don't blame you for checking MTT all day though, it can be addictive. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2008 10:17 am Title: Chapter 4
She's almost free!! :) I hope this guy doesn't try to hurt Jim too. I think if he did thought Jim would kick his a**. Great update. I can't wait for more. :)
Date: February 23, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
ah!!! This is crazy! I'm guessing it's Toby .. it's Toby, right?! I don't think he would ever do something like this, but that's what it's fanfiction. Please finish! (twss).
Author's Response: Well I can't tell you who it is, that would ruin the surprise! I'm planning on adding one, maybe two more chapters today (2/24/08).
10 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2008 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG, poor Pam. She has got to be terrified at what this guy going to do to her. I have a idea of who it might be, but I'm not sure. And poor Jim is going to go crazy with worry. I hope he can find her soon.
The Office is by far my favorite tv show, but sometimes I love a little action & drama too. This is a great combination and I can't wait to see what happens next!! Thanks for posting. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love a little drama too :). I hope you continue to enjoy it as I update.
Date: February 23, 2008 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh! I love this and I can't wait for more! I hope Jim finds her soon and she is alive! aahhh! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I hope he finds her soon too!
Date: February 22, 2008 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know the song but this is really great. I'm glad Jim realized something was wrong.
Author's Response: It's actually a grouping of many songs. They tend to have creepy lyrics and it fits perfectly. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: February 22, 2008 10:22 pm Title: Introduction
Eeek it's already really creepy! I do love a good Pam-in-danger story. =)
Author's Response: Perfect! You should be utterly creeped out already, that's my whole plan.
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2008 09:57 pm Title: Introduction
I think I'm going to enjoy this. Please update soon!
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it! :) I have part of the next chapter written but I don't know if I'm going to post it tonight or work on it some more then post it tomorrow. I guess you'll have to wait and see. Oh the suspense!!