8 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
"She thinks about how she kisses him again and again because she doesn’t want to not touch him ever again."
That was a beautiful line. I really liked how you started each line with "She thinks".
Date: February 28, 2008 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1
So, so pretty. How much like love, to take us away from the grind of daily life and back to a place of wonder. Beautiful.
9 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1
so gorgeous. it makes me think of a billie holiday song.
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 07:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love thisl. So beautiful. I love the part when she cries at how beautiful it all is. That made me cry.
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* loved it. I really miss the Jam. Thanks for this, love your stuff as always :)
Date: February 27, 2008 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such beautiful imagery of them slowly swaying together in the dim living room. Peaceful, quiet, them.
And the last line about watching him reminds me of the scene from Fun Run where she's looking at him from her desk with such love in her eyes.
Another winner, unfold!
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2008 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
hmmm. so lovely. as usual a brilliant little piece that I just love to death. well done.
Date: February 27, 2008 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
You are Queen of the Fluffy Romantic One-Shot -- I don't know how else to put it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2008 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this is wonderful! Can not wait to read more.