9 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 01:31 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
Love-love-love that Dwight thinks it's a prank against him! Four times! Ha!
And love that Michael had no clue. This is really good, Krissy. You've matched characters and situations so well. Awesome :)
Author's Response: :) Thank you Shan. You made me smile. and thank Luna Mystik for Michael. He didn't make the original cut. I just kept thinking he'd be clueless and then realized that was no reason not to point it out! LOL!
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 12:14 pm Title: Keeping Secrets
Loved this. Everyone was dead on, but I think we learned a lot about Roy from his section. This was such a cute line - "He's just looking back at her - all sappy and googly eyed".
Author's Response:
As I always say - Roy's not a bad guy - he's just oblivious. Thanks kaystar!
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 07:43 am Title: Keeping Secrets
I wasn't really criticizing, just reacting.
I forgot to say last time--I can't express how much I love the "Vince & Jen" vs. "Brad & Angelina" exclusive sequence.
Author's Response:
That's totally OK! It just always amazes me how things can be interpreted. That is why 9 times out of 10 I prefer books to movies. The way I see something rarely gets translated to screen the same way.
And thanks! ;) I might read US Weekly and People religiously.
Might. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 07:35 am Title: Keeping Secrets
Just saw the Creed addenda...genius.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks Colette!
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 06:26 am Title: Keeping Secrets
I love vignettes! They were all very good (and character-appropriate), but Dwight's stood out because of "It actually looks like they enjoying kissing each other".
I would have loved to have loved how Michael found out, but his eternal obliviousness is well-adressed by his vignette's absence.
Author's Response:
2 things...did Dwight stand out because you thought it was funny or because of my grammatical typo? LOL! and re: Michael - You know - now that I think about it I might go back and add him and Creed. Check back in a bit. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 06:00 am Title: Keeping Secrets
Oooh. That last one was kind of mean to Roy. I mean, I do think he cares about Pam.
But overall, such fun!
Author's Response: Oooo. Really? :( I didn't realize it might come off that way. That totally wasn't my intention. I do think Roy cares about Pam. It's just that when he saw the way she looked with Jim it sort of gave him the OK to move on. Glad you thought it was fun nonetheless! :)
Date: September 10, 2006 05:52 am Title: Keeping Secrets
What a great series of vignettes! As always in your stories, J&P are perfectly drawn and you really nailed the other characters too (my soft spot is always for Phyllis.)Light, satisfying and absolutely charming.
Author's Response: I love me some Phyllis. ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 05:44 am Title: Keeping Secrets
I love this!!! You were able to capture each character so well. It figures that Kevin would be renting porn and that Dwight would think it was all a plan to mess with his head! You always write such great stories. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Gen! I'm so glad you liked it. And thanks also for posting the story to the challenges for me. You're too quick. I went to do it myself but you beat me to it!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2006 05:31 am Title: Keeping Secrets
Oh, yay! Such great, spot-on fluff; this is exactly the reaction everyone else will have once Pam comes to her freakin' senses!! *ahem-sorry. Hee.*
Author's Response: No need to apologize to me. I'm sooooo hoping this is exactly the way it happens!