Date: October 20, 2008 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I love this! I can't wait for more!
Date: October 20, 2008 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Three
Just letting you know, I think this is super interesting and I'm going to get through all of the chapters tonight probably, but right now I have to go watch Halloween, because this chapter really made me want to. Plus, Halloween is pretty soon, so...tis the season. That's not right, is it?
Date: September 12, 2008 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I am still enjoying your premise! I like the banter between the brothers.
9 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 11:37 am Title: Chapter Seven
Hey, binx! Nice job on this chap. I enjoy the background info that you supply. That last phone call--so heartbreaking.
Date: August 24, 2008 03:40 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I've missed you!!! I'm so happy to be reading this! I'm glad everyone is coming out of the woodworks, I miss everyone!
Date: August 24, 2008 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I found this story a few days ago and really liked it. (I was going to review but my internet ended up being the stupid wireless card that it was and losing internet for a few hours, so I ended up forgetting.) I saw you had a new chapter up and can I just say it is by far the best yet-- with Jim opening up to Jon, I was drawn in so quickly. Great chapter, can't wait for #8!
Date: August 24, 2008 01:52 pm Title: Chapter One
I liked this. Jon's last line in particular. I also hope to hear more from Mom Halpert. The jungle voicemail was fun. Update soon please :)
9 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 01:51 pm Title: Chapter Seven
This is a great story! I love some of the badass lines between Jim and Jon. I also love how you get a glimpse of the development of Jon & Lorraine's relationship through the phone calls.
I've gotta run and do something now but I'll go back later and write some reviews for previous chapters.
Date: August 24, 2008 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I love this story. Ever since I first read it I've been waiting for the Casino Night chapter, and it did not disappoint! Keep up the great work!
6 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2008 09:05 pm Title: Chapter One
Awww I heart Jim and Jon
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 02:06 pm Title: Chapter One
I hope you plan to continue this. It's great. I love how Jon is worried about Jim. Can't wait to read the conversation they have after Jim tells her.
Date: August 11, 2008 03:06 am Title: Chapter One
I love it! Hope you're gonna write more.=) But.. I read a lot about how Jim goes to Australia when he needs to get away, 'cause of Pam's wedding. I didn't know that! In what episode does he say that?
Date: July 01, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Three
I just discovered this fic and I'm so glad I did! I have to work early in the morning, but I'm going to read the rest as soon as I can, because I love that you're digging into Jim's head and the dialog between him and Jon is perfect. Great job!
Date: June 11, 2008 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Three
"Jim?! This is big! This is huge-!"
"That's what she said..."
"Who said? Pam?!"
"No...not...it's a joke Michael does and it's...annoying...look, it doesn't matter."
That made me... so happy.
Date: June 11, 2008 04:32 pm Title: Chapter Two
I looked up that video on youtube.
Um... awesome. Holy crap.
I really like this story. :)
Date: April 07, 2008 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Five
I love this back and forth they have where they insult each other, but they can also see right through each other. You capture that really well!
Date: April 07, 2008 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Four
I am SO glad that someone finally nailed Jim on how he uses humor to deflect serious emotions! Awesome!
Date: April 07, 2008 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Three
That's one of my favorite episodes (the one with the Maryland job), so I'm glad you used it!
--Strider
Date: April 07, 2008 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Two
Leave it to brothers to point out the awkward realities...good job writing that!
--Strider
Date: April 07, 2008 07:49 pm Title: Chapter One
I love the ribbing between the brothers--so real! And I like how you wrote Jim's disappointment being just a bit too much for a casual crush. Very telling...
--Strider
Date: March 15, 2008 01:30 pm Title: Chapter Four
Your description of why Pam is so stuck on Roy, how she doesn't realize how great she is and therefor doesn't understand what other people would see in her, is so spot on. I can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2008 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Four
*Sigh* Oh, those Halpert boys...
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Three
Binx, I have developed quite an appreciation for this story. It's so dialog-heavy, but so entertaining. It never feels bogged down (I hope that makes sense). You have really captured a great brotherly relationship. They obviously care for each other, but the teasing is such fun. Great job.
Date: March 13, 2008 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Three
LOVE IT!! I've never understood the Jon phenomenon, I mean seriously...who started it?? It almost irks me to the point that I want to name his brother something else, but I never do because like you said, he's totally become a real character here. I also love that you made him silly and a little gross, like brothers should be. Sometimes in stories Jon gets entirely too sage-like...Jim had to have had some ridiculous siblings to turn out the way he did.
I really love this and I can't wait to see what he has to say about the things coming up :)
Date: March 12, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Chapter One
How I love boy talk! You've got these guys down so perfectly! I love that Jon's a bit of a horndog and I love how he teases Jim. I'm really enjoying this and looking forward to more!