10 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2008 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, I loved it. Poor Pam. :[
I loved everything about it. My favorite part was:
'He didn't go around and open the passenger door for her, like he always did. For some reason, that hurt the most.'
That was so sad because I could imagine Jim always opening the car door open for Pam.
Superb job!
Date: January 14, 2008 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
ok i just came acrosss this so i had to review it was soooooooo cute :D and your writing is beautiful
9 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 05:13 am Title: Chapter 1
i'm so glad you reviewed my story, because now i've found you, and I love you.
7 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2006 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
A very lovely story. It accomplishes several thing--it's honest, it's well written, and it feels like Jim and Pam. This is dialogue that I could hear from these two. My only real criticism of the story is that it doesn't do anything extravegantly daringl, but that shouldn't be considered a huge problem. It's a short, well-done character piece, and in that vein, I think you are to be highly commended. Keep up the good work.
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Makes things interesting." - fights suck, but yeah, they do make life interesting. Jim and Pam wouldn't *not* fight, and this was well presented.
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2006 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
so beautiful, real & painful. i think you did such a wonderful job of capturing what their voices & dynamic would be like in this type of situation.
Date: September 13, 2006 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent work. You captured this perfectly.
9 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
The fight seems very real--how often do fights like that have important causes?--and I love how they make up, of course!
9 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, you nailed the fight. That is exactly how that feels. And the resolution was perfect. Very nice!
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very realistic, reminded me of some of the fights my husband and I have had - especially saying mean things that you know aren't really meant but are said in the heat of the fight. It's a shame that Pam misread his support but I'm glad for the happy ending!
7 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so what a Jim/Pam fight would like. Sweet ending too!
7 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that letter made me so sad. So sad. I felt so bad for her in that moment, but I love that Jim was so supportive of her. A sweet piece.
Date: September 12, 2006 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was fantastic. You made my stomach hurt a bit. The part about him not opening the car door for her killed - specifically because I just wrote a scene where Jim did open her door (per usual) and it made Pam swoon a bit. His gentlemanly-ness is one of my favorite things about him - but I digress....
Completely realistic and very well done. Great job!
8 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1
No make up kissing/sex? :) Great job
Date: September 12, 2006 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Very realistic. I mean, most people would rather avoid the subject than face it head on. Or maybe that's just me? Nice job.
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story, it was a realistic slice-of-life if Pam and Jim were to get together. It's hard to be together and work together - I know, I do it with my spouse and we act exactly the same way! This was great.
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this. Dialogue was especially well done - sounded just like them and it was easy to get a vivid picture of them as well. Really, really good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2006 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1
You capture that sickening, disconnected feeling of a fight really well, along with all of the little details (like the wrong shoes). Too well, almost- it was upsetting! :) Thank goodness for a great resolution.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the thing that gets me really angry is when I lose something... always gets a fight going somehow!