Date: August 28, 2023 09:55 am Title: Smokey the Bear
Pam's inner monologue is another great character of its own! ...Is he kidding me with this? Does someone write this shit for him?...Oh hello smug smirk, nice of you to join us...
Date: August 28, 2023 09:42 am Title: Bonnie and Clyde
"Why are you being so nice to me?”
“Because you’re letting me." This just gets a confused and questioning look from me. "You forget I don’t hate you, you hate me.” - this part is so perfect
Date: September 14, 2021 02:29 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things
I know this story is 13 years old now but pleaseeeee finish it!!!! It’s so great!!
Date: February 10, 2019 09:03 am Title: The Surface of the Sun
Every time I read this I forget how much I love it and I forget where it ends. If you ever get a 10 year or whatever itch and just want to write more of it, please indulge that whim. Otherwise, I guess just thanks for having written it. It is one of the most amazing AUs on the site.
Date: September 26, 2017 05:12 am Title: Pretty Pink Things
Oh how I wish I had been aware of mtt back when you were writing this. I would have been one of your biggest supporters and maybe we would have gotten a happy ending to this amazing story!
And yeah, the smut is great but it's really the AU love story that I've fallen for. I love that jims feelings for Pam had nothing to do with the reputation that preceded him and I love that he is working so hard to try to change her perception of him and earn her respect and love. And I love that Jonathan was in on the whole thing and supported him wholly.
It kills me that I don't get to read the outcome :( That was going to be one hell of a 4th of July party!
It's never too late ya know! We've recently had a couple old abandoned fics resurrected some 7-10 years later ;)
Date: July 13, 2010 02:31 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things
LOVE the entire concept of this story. I am amazed at the way you were able to put Jim and Pam, plus the others in an entirely different scenerio yet totally be true to their personalities. I love the slow reveal of how much Jim cares for and is in fact in love with Pam and the fact that you can clearly see that she is in just as deep as he is. Love the element of him wanting to cook for her and her buying something sexy to wear for him that shows there is a lot more to this than sex.
I REALLY hope you will be continuing this story despite it being so ong since there was an update!
Date: December 16, 2009 08:20 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things
If you're at all curious if too much time has passed and no one's interested in seeing this continue, not too much time and we actually arestill very interested. I figured I'd let you know, just in case :)
Date: June 21, 2009 08:51 am Title: Pretty Pink Things
So I happened to stumbled upon this little gem while browsing the archive and the summary was too tempting for me not to read. And now I wished I hadn't start reading because it is so good and addicting but it's not complete! The tension between Jim and Pam was great and when they finally acted on their attraction for one another...wow...that was unbelievably hot. Really, really hot! I really like the alternate universe you've created for TO characters. Overall, this was a really great story! I can only hope that you'll continue this eventually (and judging by the reviews, I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one ;o)
Date: June 06, 2009 11:41 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things
NO MORE??????????
Date: June 06, 2009 11:19 pm Title: Night Vision
Humminah, I love sexy hot shirtless Jim!
Date: June 06, 2009 10:55 pm Title: W.B.F.F.'s
The fact you love TWW and are a J&D shipper makes me love you even more... LOVE IT!!!
Date: June 06, 2009 10:39 pm Title: Bad Manners
Extra dirty smutcakes = fecking awesome. You are a goddess!
Date: June 06, 2009 10:28 pm Title: Hot Little Biddy
How have I missed this story, you're a goddess =)
Date: June 06, 2009 10:14 pm Title: Smokey the Bear
*dead*
Date: June 06, 2009 09:59 pm Title: Bonnie and Clyde
Guh, Okay, so that was freaking HOT. You're killing me here, in the best way possible!
Date: June 06, 2009 09:44 pm Title: World Domination
Okay this is all kinds of hot. I love confident sexy young Jim - and Pam drunk - awesome!!!!!!
Date: June 06, 2009 09:31 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun
LMAO what a great idea, Jim so wants to do heeeeer!
Date: January 06, 2009 05:41 am Title: The Surface of the Sun
I read this story again last night and I'm begging you to continue. I really want to see what comes of this version of Jim and Pam! I'm loving this story like a fat kid loves cake!
Date: December 13, 2008 06:08 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun
You need to finish this! It is so awesome!!!
Date: November 10, 2008 02:40 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things
This story is fantastic! I don't usually go for totally AU stories where the characters are so different from what I am used to on the show but this is great. You need to finish this (or at least update this) now. Please?
Date: November 07, 2008 03:42 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things
Really want to know what happens next!! Keep going.
Date: October 07, 2008 07:49 am Title: Pretty Pink Things
I just re-read this and all I have to say is, please update! I love this story!
Date: October 05, 2008 11:00 am Title: The Surface of the Sun
Like people have already said, I would LOVE for this story to continue. I can see it's been a while since you updated, but sincerely hope that you would consider letting us know how John's dinner preparations go ;o) Amazingly hot story!
Date: October 04, 2008 08:58 am Title: Pretty Pink Things
Like the best 5 or so reviewers, I would also love if you updated this amazing story!
Date: September 26, 2008 05:51 pm Title: Pretty Pink Things
I just reread what is one of the most fun and hot stories I've read on the site. Not sure if you're around anymore, but I wanted to leave some love for the story and some hope that there could be an update. There's just too much good stuff left hanging to leave it there :)