10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
You have officially become one of my favorited authors.
Date: May 22, 2008 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Suh-weet. A very pretty ending to an otherwise not so pretty episode. :) Love that last line, too!
Date: May 19, 2008 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet. She may be FNB, but all that Roy stuff is certainly still there, lurking in corners. Nicely done, as usual.
Date: May 18, 2008 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE that he didn't even have to ask after all that. Perfect.
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whew. That was amazingly good, unfold, and so heartfelt. It really made me want to cry.
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sigh*
Amazing as always. I never know what to say because I just feel like it'll never do your writing justice. I just really loved this. I love how his trying not to be like Roy actually was making him like Roy and Pam's pointing it out helped convince him not to keep stalling.
This was just really beautiful.
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, lovely, lovely. I like the tension of her comparing him to Roy (even though she doesn't mean to). There are so many post-finale fics out there, but I'd be a happy woman if they were only half as good as this. Bravo! -CH
Date: May 17, 2008 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
"He kisses her before she can say anything else, pushing her hair out of her face. When her mouth opens under his, she tastes like rainwater and she’s shaking just a little and all of it makes his heart ache, because tonight really was supposed to be it. "
WONDERFUL!
Date: May 17, 2008 06:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes, for the love of God, Jim brings his own fireworks!
Put that damn ring on her finger already!!! Nicely done, unfold.
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 05:05 am Title: Chapter 1
"He slides the ring onto her finger and thinks that the drip-drop of rain against the window is just as good as the pop of fireworks."
i LOVE that, and I totally agree. thanks. each fic i read makes me feel better and better.
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you. I needed this almost as much as Pam did.
9 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good story! The Roy comparison is quite believable. At least, that's how I'd feel if I were Pam.
Then again if I were Pam, I'd probably just ask Jim to marry me. Ok, that's a lie.