10 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2009 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how you reference actual canon scenes into your story. I notice this hasn't been updated in a loooong time...any possibility that there's an update lurking around in your brain? I'm dying to see what happens in the Jim/Pam/Lauren triangle.
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2008 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
Delicious! I think you know how much I'm enjoying this story. I don't have any requests just keep 'em coming and I'm a happy camper!
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2008 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Pam needs to meet Lauren and see how she treats Jim, like the way Jim knows Roy is a jerk :)
Date: August 06, 2008 07:24 am Title: Chapter 6
I really liked it. I liked how Lauren just brushed it off (very Royish) and how they were both just stuck thinking about it all day. Loved this chapter. :D
Date: July 18, 2008 10:33 am Title: Chapter 5
Great Job Jinxcoke. I think the way you engineer the twists and turns in this story is believably done and I can't wait for more. Update soon...and sorry I was a late with the beta help!
BAx
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
I have to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. I love the role reversal and how we see Pam eating her heart out over Jim. Really, I want to see this series last for a long, long time. I'm enjoying your take on their relationship a lot. I can't articulate it very well but it has a gentleness and sweetness to it and want it to continue for as many chapters as you have in you.
Jim coming to the realization that he's falling for Pam and that's she more than just his friend is something that I can't wait to read but I don't want it to come too fast. Are you seeing a trend here? lol
Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your awesome review! It was so nice! It really makes me happy that people are liking this story! Thanks again! I really appreciate it!
Date: July 14, 2008 05:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Interesting twist on The Dundies. I'm liking the way your story is shaping up!
BTW, I think you've got an unfinished paragraph hanging in the middle there:
His tone was light and she could tell he was joking, but there was a slight, almost sad look in his eyes. She lifted up her mug and said, “Well here’s to being unoriginal.” Pam then quickly
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out! I don't know how that happened! rnrnThanks for the review! I am glad that you are liking the story!
Date: July 13, 2008 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was awesome! I always wanted Jim to drive Pam home from the Dundies and shifting the kiss to a goodnight kiss was lovely.
Can't wait to hear more about Lauren (and how crazy she is for not wanting to spend time with Jim!)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I am so glad you liked it!
Date: July 13, 2008 02:00 am Title: Chapter 5
oooh it's lovely. Lovely awards. and it's the little things, you know? Like her watching the tapes of award shows of the past. Just love!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Next chapter should be up soon!
Date: July 13, 2008 01:55 am Title: Chapter 4
Awwwww I LOVE!
Date: July 13, 2008 01:47 am Title: Chapter 2
scruffy John on a Vespa!!!
I'm enjoying it immensely!
Date: July 12, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
The Dunders? Great chapter, I can't wait until we see this Lauren, whose insane, obviously. And the kissing Jim on her door step Pam...Love her!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Yes...Lauren might be a tad bit insanse...I mean who leaves Jim alone...anywhere?
Date: June 25, 2008 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like how you're simultaneously dovetailing and diverging from events on the show. Very nicely done! And I like your Pam & Jim...
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2008 08:56 am Title: Chapter 4
Really enjoying the twist. And altenately looking forward to and dreading your version of Casino Night. If Pam holds out that long....
Date: June 25, 2008 01:46 am Title: Chapter 4
This story is awesome! I love what you are doing with the characters and can't wait to see things get more complicated :)
Date: June 21, 2008 05:39 am Title: Chapter 3
Awesome! I loved how you wove Health Care into your story. I also loved the end:
She smiled and waved and Jim watched her red tail lights disappear down the road, confused by the slight flutter that he felt in his chest.
*sigh*
Date: June 08, 2008 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jim POV! Jim POV! JIM POV!!!!!
Author's Response: That was fast!! Good! I am glad that someone else wants it!
Date: June 08, 2008 02:38 am Title: Chapter 2
This is good! It's interesting to see the shoe on the other foot.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you!! More should be up soon!
8 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Glad you like the story! Next chapter should be up soon!
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is so different! I certainly don't think that I could EVER be so focused on my career that I'd leave JIM waiting to get married ;-) but i like it - keep going!
Author's Response: I would never leave him waiting either! Hopefully he won't have to wait ....for someone else that is. :)
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this story so much!! I love how the roles are completely reversed! It's so intersting to read! Plus, it's really wel-written. So please, please keep those chapters coming, because I am certainly enjoying the hell out of it! Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your review! Next chapter should be up soon! Thanks again!
Date: June 02, 2008 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! More soon!!
Date: June 02, 2008 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm very interested in this story I love it when roles are reversed. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I am glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2008 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so worth continuing! I'm really interested to see where you're gonna take this. It's a very original idea. I hope you'll update soon, because I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I am so glad that you like it! More should be up soon!
8 [Report This]Date: June 02, 2008 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Cute! Looking forward to seeing where it goes!
Author's Response: I love your name! That is awesome! One of my favorite Dwight lines! Thanks for the review!