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I read this when you first posted this, and I can't believe I didn't review! Thank you for enabling me in my attempts to live vicariously through Pam. Seriously, thank you. :)

Man, you write first perso Pam well. I love the fact she oogles on the sly. Even though she doesn't have to. And Jim's reaction. Haha. Love it.

Oooh, wanna know a funny story about invisible fences? We used one for years with my old dog. So when I got a new puppy, once she was old enough we put the coller on her. So she's running around, exploring the yard. She gets to the edge, it shocks her, and she jumps up, does a flip in mid air, gets so scared, runs right back inside. Was one of those times I just wanted to love on her and laugh at the same time. Even still, like 4-5 years later, she still is afraid to go anywhere close to the edge of the yard. Its like, run out, pee, run back inside. She's a silly dog.
Not that that has anything to do with Pam or Jim... oops.

I always wonder what his skin feels like. Not so much smell. But the feel. Is that weird? Eh, probably not here at MTT. Real life yes. So, keep those houghts to myself as I go out to lunch!

Lalalala skipping over everything thats weird for me to read (you see why I stick to mild or less).... but if Jim goes back to Stamford, I may have to kill someone...

Jim sings in the shower!

Oh, yummy. I seriously don't blame Pam for checking him out so often ;) This was wonderful.

“Were you reading one of your smutty novels while I was out?”

No, Jim. She was reading some of Wendolf's fic. Yowza. Oh, and -

"I was sure, in a way that made me breathless and squirmy inside, that he’d use it the way he did everything: cleverly and gently and subtly."

Jim Halpert in three adjectives.

I need a cigarette.

Holy Hotness Fanfic Writer... this is awesome. Thank you for doing such a great job of describing how I feel, I mean Pam feels. I love when Jim says "shit" it just adds to his hotness.

This was so perfect, great visual: When he raised his arms above his head to put a dish back in a high cabinet I couldn’t reach, I’d covertly watch his t-shirt rise up to reveal a narrow strip of irresistible skin above his jeans.

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Wendolf!  What a beautiful story.  I love your version of first person.  Every word was believable and in character. 

I felt like a dog with the electric collar and invisible fence, who tries to wander off or roam further than he is allowed and gets stopped in his tracks by a sudden zap. A reminder. A reprimanding uh uh uh, that’s not where you’re supposed to be expressed in a less than subtle shock wave around his neck. That’s what my guilt felt like. I’d glance up at Jim, stare too long, start to think too much and then I’d suddenly realize what I was doing and ZAP. Back to reality. If I could pinpoint where the shock came from, I’d say the little metal collar around my ring finger. And I’d reluctantly return to where I had been trained to stay. Within my invisible fence.

Right on the money.  Describes it perfectly.

So many beautiful passages Wendolf.  Once again, you've raised the bar, my friend.  Thank you for this. :-)

Ohhh, this is wonderful. Extraordinarily hot, and not in an obvious way either.

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yay! fabulous fabulosity as always. i loved the last paragraph & sentence. amaaaazing. just - wow. Great job!

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Ah.  I knew when I saw a Wendolf story that it would be great.  Really good first person story, this is!  I think this is very true – Jim would be far more comfortable with openly admiring Pam's body than vice versa.  I can't pick a favorite passage.  Love it all.

So I suck at constructive reviewing but this is fabulous!

Pam = #1 Hussy

Rest of Hussies sit behind Pam in a group nodding in agreement with Pam's observations.

Haha!  Another winner, wendolf.  And another "Jim in a towel" fic.  Impossible to have too many of those.  Nice addition to the "middle of the month" smutfest.

Oh so good... I love seeing Jim and Pam together *sigh*