9 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 05:47 pm Title: The Cold Open
Wow. I really liked the chapters so far, I hop you're still planning on continuing? I can't wait to see how Jim acts around Karen!
Date: August 05, 2008 10:39 am Title: Act One
Transient Lesbian Con Artist! HA! And then it's all OK because she likes Battlestar. Man alive I love Dwight. That shit is dawesome.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked this belsum. That was actually my favorite line of this act, so I'm glad that you found it funny as well. Thank you for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!
Date: July 29, 2008 06:32 pm Title: Act One
hahaha so funny ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks BuffyFreak7, I appreciate the review.
Date: July 28, 2008 09:20 am Title: Act One
OK, you've taken the already-cool Holly and made her awesome! Also, "I knew it was going to be Kevin anyway," made me laugh out loud. This is continuing to be so great!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked that line nqllisi. That was one of the last lines I put in on an edit, so I'm glad it worked. I think it kind of puts a period on the end of that scene. Thanks for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2008 06:56 pm Title: Act One
REALLY enjoyed this act. I especially enjoyed your Holly. Great job.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked Holly NanReg. Since we know so little about her I kind of had to create most of her up. Also because I'm sort of writing these as real episodes it makes sense that early into the season they would spend a little of time with her character to get the viewers to know her a little better. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2008 02:27 pm Title: Act One
Awesome :) Great characterizations all around!
Author's Response: Thank you so much untherapy. I'm glad that you liked the characterizations, I try hard to get those right. It was especially hard with Holly because we know so little about her. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: July 24, 2008 12:14 pm Title: The Cold Open
Oh my gods. Karen. That is brilliant. Looking forward to this "episode"!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the Karen "twist" as it were. I hope to mine it for funny and uncomfortable situations in the coming acts. Thank you for taking the time to review belsum.
Date: July 24, 2008 10:30 am Title: The Cold Open
Hehehe......great opening. I found myself really wanting that to happen. I think it would be great fun to have Karen shake things up a bit.
Author's Response: I think it would be a lot of fun too. I don't think they'd ever do this on the show, but I think it would be great if they did. That is, as long as they give her a personality this time around. Thanks for taking the time to review Pisa.
Date: July 23, 2008 05:51 am Title: The Cold Open
Yay, more! I love that David honestly appreciates Michael, but also is smart enough to know how to handle him- have a separate conference call AND make sure Jim is on the line. This just feels so much like the actual show. Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and review nqllisi. I thought it was a fun idea for David to insulate himself and others from Michael as much as possible but yet still treat him like the boss of the branch and professionally.
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2008 05:06 pm Title: The Cold Open
whoa totally didn't expect THAT to happen. can't WAIT to read what happends next!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that I caught you by surprise there BuffyFreak7. I think its a fun twist that could bring about all kinds of fun and uncomfortable situations. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: July 22, 2008 02:59 pm Title: The Cold Open
Interesting twist. I'm curious to see where you go with this...
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the twist, and I hope you'll enjoy the payoff for it. I doubt they'd do this on the show, but I don't think it would be a bad idea if they did. Still, thank you for taking the time to review JennInTheCity, I appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2008 02:54 pm Title: The Cold Open
I liked this and I don't usually read script stories, just skip over them. This one intrigued me. I just hope this is not what happens in season 5! Look forward to where this goes.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you decided to give this one a chance Cheeb. I know that a lot of people don't even consider reading script-fic, and I don't really understand that. Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it.