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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 07:57 pm Title: Epilogue - part 2

Please don't let jim be a douche :(

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 07:54 pm Title: Epilogue - part 1

OMG IF PAM RUINS THIS lmao.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 30

YESSSSSSSSSS yay for JEM? lol

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 29

Awwwwww this is coming to an end, makes me sad :(

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 28

ew peter :(

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 27

The ILY was PERFECT.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 26

AMAZING. Seriously. I never htought I would like Emily, but I love her.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 25

Jim on her sister's list, love it... but ahhh I love Emily.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 24

Aw they love each other :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 23

i am in love with you lmao.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 22

God this is amazinnnnnng

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 21

Jim and Emily = HOT

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Date: November 16, 2008 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 20

God they're amazing together lol.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 14

HOT EMILY!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 12

I love emily

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 11

Nooooooooooooooooooo Jim, it's Pam's fault not yours lol

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 9

I want to hug Emily, is that wrong? lol

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

yeah, bye pam lmao

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 6

I want him with emily lmao

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2008 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 5

Well I love this, and I really like Emily.

Reviewer: wallflower Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2008 08:31 am Title: Chapter 5

This gives me a kind of uneasy feeling in my stomach but it has such a good concept and is so well written that I love it, obviously, and it just makes me really mad that some people will give ten out of ten to fluff with no originality, overused phrases and plots and not even give this a chance. I'm really surprised to find myself liking Emily. I don't know how you've succeeded at making her interesting, fun, and perfect for Jim, without making her into a Curly Sue or whatever happens usually when a new character is introduced.
The slow disintegration of Jim and Pam is really just exsquisitely written, it's like a gradual fade, a realistic progression that's coming from the characterisation, it's really good. I'm kindof glad I'm reading now that it's finished, and I'll know the conclusion of this within a couple of hours, but even if Pam and Jim don't end up together, this won't have been a waste of time, because it is so well put together, I love the characterisation, Jim is so perfect and spot on, and. just. really good.

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2008 06:13 am Title: Epilogue - part 3

It reads true.. Jim has so much invested in Emily now that he wouldn't dump her. He has been through the ringer with Pam and now he has an uncomplicated love with a new woman. It wouldn't read right if he just left her, I don't think. I love Pam but she let this one go. Great job. And I can't wait to read it from her perspective. Look at you with the clever little sequel ideas!

Reviewer: thepottersdaughter Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2008 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Best. Fanfic. Ever.

Looking forward to the Pam companion piece

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 03:42 pm Title: Epilogue - part 3

Okay, so after reading your end notes I feel kinda bad. I've been seeing your story on the 'most recent' page for a while and I snuck a peek at the first chapter. I got kinda nervous at the thought of a Jim/Pam story minus the Pam and decided that when the story was marked complete, THEN I'd read it in full. Sometimes waiting for updates on stories I am invested in makes me feel a touch crazy. BUT today I read the entire thing and I really really enjoyed it. I loved Emily, and how she was a person with a personality completely different from what we've seen Jim with in the past. I loved how she dealt realistically with the 'Celebrity' situation. I really loved her sister also, and the 'pencil shapening' term also. My sister and I have always used the terms, 'pencil' and 'pencil case' so I laughed aloud at that one. But, so you know, I am really looking forward to reading Pam's POV. Sometimes reading this {Jim's} story made me feel bad about them and I need to know her story too. Very good AU, but when the Office returns in a couple weeks, I need happy JAM!! Looking forward to more from you! AVO

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2008 11:14 pm Title: Epilogue - part 3

Congratulations! You should be very proud of yourself. This was the perfect ending to an excellent story. You truly are a gifted writer. I'm glad you chose not to recap the reason for Pam's visit to Jim. All that matters is that Jim Halpert is happy and love is so much easier for him this second time. Thanks Wendolf for sharing your story here.

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