Reviews For A Grand Gesture
Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2006 01:30 pm Title: The Wedding
Date: September 19, 2006 01:30 pm Title: The Wedding
Hahahaha. Oh please tell me that there's going to be more. So, so awesome and very original.
Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2006 12:39 pm Title: The Wedding
Date: September 19, 2006 12:39 pm Title: The Wedding
LOL, that last sentence is perfect!
Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2006 12:00 pm Title: The Wedding
Date: September 19, 2006 12:00 pm Title: The Wedding
My head started to spin when Pam's did.
So in other words...well done. :)
Anxiously awaiting parts II and III.
Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2006 11:24 am Title: The Wedding
Date: September 19, 2006 11:24 am Title: The Wedding
praying that someone would stop Dwight before he was able to attempt mouth-to-mouth resuscitation.
That was perfect. I could just see Dwight running up to her too.
Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2006 11:22 am Title: The Wedding
Date: September 19, 2006 11:22 am Title: The Wedding
Still love that first line. I wasn't sure how you would break this into chapters, but this is a great choice. Again, nicely agitated Pam POV!
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2006 09:37 am Title: The Wedding
Date: September 19, 2006 09:37 am Title: The Wedding
Oh, Pam. PAM. Stupid, stupid girl. At least she did something- finally! This has a really great tone- tense and realistic but somehow still light and comedic. Great job!