Date: August 19, 2008 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
There will be no angry letters unless you don't post SOON. It was a perfect confrontation. You are fabulous.
Date: August 19, 2008 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh no angry letters here. I love the angst - as long as there is a happy resolution, and I know you Moxie ;) Can't wait for more!
Date: August 19, 2008 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow! I can' wait to see where this is going. I like that you didn't have Jim immediately go back to Pam. You are going to have him go to her though right?
Date: August 19, 2008 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow. Great chapter, Mox. Really taut and tense - Jim's simmering anger and Pam's nervousness, then courage, then defeat, were so palpable. And you're still scaring me with how well you channel House. Really liking this.
Date: August 19, 2008 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
Had to say my piece about this hugely entertaining story. I don't normally read stories where other shows' characters join in, but I tried it and I love it! This despite never having seen the TV show House. I find it extremely heady to read about Pam getting that second chance - I, too, cringed over the sleep conversation in the Break Room.
More soon, very soon, please!!
-MCC
Date: August 19, 2008 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
This story is so great! I love Dr. House! And I'm glad he's here to talk some sense into Pam. She could have used that during season 3, things would have moved along much faster. But, woah! Major cliff-hanger here! I'm dying to know what happens! Please update soon!
Date: August 19, 2008 11:08 am Title: Chapter 7
This is amazing! Are you sure you don't write for House? He is spot on!! I can't wait for more. Thank you for writing this. It's a great b-day present for my b-day today :)
Date: August 19, 2008 09:57 am Title: Chapter 7
Ooh, you left us hanging there, didn't you? You evil woman. But we have progress! So that's a good thing. Is it weird that I look forward to the Pam/House interactions (although not in that way) as much as I look forward to the Pam/Jim interactions? Still loving this.
Date: August 19, 2008 09:23 am Title: Chapter 7
Moxie, moxie, moxie... you've done it again! I ANXIOUSLY await the next chapter! Great!
Date: August 19, 2008 08:24 am Title: Chapter 7
I love the way you've built the tension in this chapter. I giggled when Pam hung up on House upon Angela's approach. I'm glad she saw some hope in his agreeing to talk with her, even though she's aware he just lied to her.
Date: August 19, 2008 08:16 am Title: Chapter 7
I loooove that House called her. Also, I find it perfectly, endearingly Pam-like to keep calling him "Dr. House". And yay, the plot thickents. Good-bye Karen, have a good night stewing!
Date: August 19, 2008 07:16 am Title: Chapter 7
hmmmmm this looks interesting....
Date: August 19, 2008 06:57 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh Moxie, you are an evil, evil woman. I guess that serves me right for hovering over the fic page waiting for new treats.
How much Red Bull do you need for the next chapter?
Author's Response: Don't worry - I've got about 9 cans left in the fridge.... :-)
Date: August 17, 2008 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've never wathced House, but I think I might have to now. What a spunky character.
This is such a fun story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: August 16, 2008 11:00 am Title: Chapter 6
I know I've told you how much I love this and how immensely I'm enjoying, but let's be honest, can anyone here that sentiment too often? This is so much fun and so different. I have only seen a handful of House episodes, if that many, but it still makes me giggle how much he just cuts to the heart of all of Pam's BS. I can't wait to see how you work out chapter 7 and I'm wearing my patience well, since I know your weekend is pretty hectic. But come Monday... ;-)
Date: August 16, 2008 05:33 am Title: Chapter 6
I love how fanciful this idea is, Mox - House as her imaginary friend! Who'd have thunk it? Perfect character to be her tough-love alter-ego. And you have his voice down so well - yikes, you're scaring me!
Date: August 15, 2008 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
i'm gonna sound like a giant nerd if i'm wrong, but it sounds like the dear sam beckett from quantum leap. wow... even if i'm right i'm still a giant nerd. haha
anyway, i'm enjoying the fun. Pam and House... and reliving (in my opinion) the Most Awkward Jam Moment EVER... awesome.
Date: August 15, 2008 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
You're having fun writing, and I am having such fun reading! Oh, if only Pam had really said that to Karen. Just perfect--not too little and not too much.
Date: August 15, 2008 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Go, Pam! Woo! That was lovely. Gentle and basically kind, but so much better than the "real" version. And I'm still loving your House.
Date: August 15, 2008 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this. I can't wait to read more!
Date: August 15, 2008 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ooh, the red herring! Karen is not the problem. (But is sure is fun to blame her, isn't it?)
Date: August 15, 2008 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
I have to be honest. I didn't read this fic at first because I don't watch House and I just didn't want to start another fic. But OMG, I love this Moxie. Plus your quick updates are like a dripping wet Michael Phelps...Thank you.
Date: August 15, 2008 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG, House in the break room. Thanks for playing. Great, now you're making me miss ANOTHER show. Freaking summer.
Date: August 15, 2008 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is just getting better with each chapter. I don't watch House but am familar with his character. Love it!