10 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2008 11:36 am Title: Assistant to the Foreman
Awww, Madge. I love stories that take people on the periphery of our show and make them real. This is heartbreaking and totally relatable. Dunder Mifflin is a hotbed of unrequited love, isn't it? Really nice work.
8 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2008 10:09 pm Title: Assistant to the Foreman
This made me feel so sad for Madge - wearing make-up, packing a special lunch to share, having to listen to Darryl talk to Kelly. Well done.
Date: August 24, 2008 10:13 am Title: Assistant to the Foreman
Oh, I really like this! Especially the way that Darryl makes everyone back off her so easily -- he's just such a natural leader, and of course Madge would see that.
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate you saying that. Thanks for reading!
Date: August 24, 2008 07:17 am Title: Assistant to the Foreman
How you doin’?
Is it so wrong I hear Joey in the back of my mind every time I hear or read someone saying this? ;)
I like hearing from peripheral characters once in awhile, and I thought you wrote Darryl well- he always delivers more than people seem to expect from a warehouse guy. Liked this piece! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought of Joey when I wrote it, but that's how Darryl would say it, too, so I just went with it. Thanks for the review!
Date: August 23, 2008 09:49 pm Title: Assistant to the Foreman
Poor Madge :(
I thought this was creative and you did a great job writing Madge even though so little is really known about her.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was interesting to give her some thought. Thanks for reading.