1 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2023 01:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Great piece!
Date: October 07, 2008 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww, very sweet. That comment in the episode just melted me, and this just expounded upon that.
Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love that scene and just needed a little more. I'm glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2008 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW!
That was amazing!
I totally got goosebumps!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: September 13, 2008 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey if they do it for movies then they could definitely do it for the office! I mean what is more important than the office!
Yeah I had too much coffee!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really do appreciate the enthusiasm. :)
8 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant, you should keep writing :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I've got a few more stories up my sleeve somewhere. :)
Date: September 12, 2008 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh that is genius!
I suggest that you suggest that to NBC and Greg Daniels!!!
Author's Response: Well, let's not get crazy. :) Seriously, though, thank you very much for the compliment!
Date: September 12, 2008 08:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job, Desslok. Welcome!
Author's Response: Thank you for the welcome. It seems like a great and very supportive community.
5 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great. This was one of my favorite deleted scenes and I love how you made it into something more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really enjoying your story, so I'm glad that you liked mine as well. :)
Date: September 11, 2008 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh that is so cute! I love it!
I watched all the deleted scenes first.
I love deleted scenes! :D
In Pam's words "AWESOME"
Author's Response: Thank you so much. There really are some great deleted scenes in all the seasons. I wish they'd set up the DVDs so you could watch the episodes with the deleted scenes inserted in the right places.
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Speechless!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll take that as a compliment. ;)
7 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first story here! I haven't seen the deleted scene that inspired it, but even as a stand alone it's a beautiful little story. So sweet and so them. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! You should definitely track down the S4 DVDs to see that deleted scene. I didn't find a lot of good JAM deleted scenes, but the one in Branch Wars is really sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gorgeous! Spot on characters!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the characters sound realistic. Their dialog and way of speaking to each other is a huge highlight of the show for me!
Date: September 11, 2008 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely LOVED that deleted scene...and I really enjoyed your interpretation of the aftermath.
Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. That scene just jumped out at me and I had to write something to "wrap it up". Hopefully this isn't my last idea for a fic. :)
Date: September 11, 2008 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so nice. I would have loved to hear them expand on that scene more. You did a great job. I would love to hear more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't understand why that scene ended up on the cutting room floor. It was so sweet.
Date: September 11, 2008 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww! How sweet was that? Hope you write more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: September 11, 2008 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet. Welcome back to fanfic!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love your stories, so this means a lot. Yeah, it's been awhile. Nothing's inspired me since like JAM in a long while though, so I'm guessing I've got a few more stories in me somewhere. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
((hits delete button)) I was gonna write on the same thing, in fact I was going to press enter, but I love yours. That scene is on of my favs now. Thank you for loving it too!
Author's Response: Don't delete! That scene certainly leaves a lot of room for interpretation. I'd love to read another take on it. I'm glad you enjoyed mine. :)
Date: September 11, 2008 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was great. I went to sleep with that deleted scene on my mind last night and you capped it off wonderfully. You could write more, if you wanted to.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know what you mean, that scene really stuck in my head too (obviously). I think I'll be writing more. Jim and Pam are just such great characters and their romance is fluff-tastic!
9 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really sweet. That deleted scene was one of my favorites so it was really nice to see it in a fic. Thanks for the read. I liked it a lot.
Author's Response: Yay, my first MTT review! Thank you so much for taking the time to say nice things about my story. I'm very glad you liked it. :)