Date: September 19, 2008 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant. Every single vignette captures at least one facet of its subject so perfectly: Michael not understanding what "baby proof" really means; Creed living on milkweed; Angela thinking of Dwight as a cat killer still;and this:
dying three times in one night is a little much, even for a Schrute.
Brilliant. Brava, brava! And another brava for concentrating on the secondary characters so well!
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I think you really captured the characters and their emotions that night, and I'm glad to not see Pam or Jim in this one because so many people have written stories about it, but not from this perspective. Very well done and refreshing! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is excellent, shoutoutout. The characterization is precise and perfect all around - I'm particularly impressed with the Dwangela sections. Andy's feeling "really, really good about this" and "dying three times in one night is a little much, even for a Schrute" just bowled me right over. Please keep sharing your writing with us.
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh wow, this was great. i think you captured each of these characters at pivotal (or in creed's case, just weird), moments. it was sweet, funny, sad...a perfect mix. really really well done.
Date: September 18, 2008 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I love the order you choose here, with some Creed to lighten the mood, and the twisted happiness of Dwangela to wrap it up. I love this.
Date: September 18, 2008 08:44 am Title: Chapter 1
I really love your story. I had such a god awful day and its only 11:43. This story made me feel alot better and even got me to laugh which is really hard to do when I'm so angry. So thank you for cheering me up
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
You captured each character so well, shoutoutout. Great job.
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great story. Your characterizations are so very good. I can't decide which character's vignette I love the most. Kevin's was hilarious and so was Michael's...they were definitely my favorites. I, of course, love all the post-GT JAM fics but this was a nice change of pace and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely spot on characterizations here. I love that you chose to focus on a good mixture of characters here, and--even though I may be in the minority here--I'm glad that none of them were Jim and Pam. Not that I don't like those two, but their inclusion would have distracted most readers from the wonderfully poignant Dwight/Angela interactions you've got going on here.
Excellent work, shoutoutout, and I'm so glad you're sharing your work with us.