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So I guess I'm behind in the times and I hadn't read this yet... wow, I was missing out! What a great proposal ficette! I could probably dissect it and analyze why it was so good, but I really just want to say that I loved the "absolutely I will." I've always wanted to read that in a story, so thanks for making that happen. Great piece!

"I missed you too much."  -- love the use of the word "too" there instead of "so"...what a sweet little one-shot. So much fun! Let's hope that's what we're in for this season!

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oh my geezles! that was amazing! and adorable! and... amorable! i'm worried about season 5 JAM from what the spoliers of officetally have told us, but this helps ease the anxiety... =]

If this is what you write out of boredom... man. So. Impressed. This is going to be a bit long because I don't know how you fit so much emotion in such a short piece without it feeling overdone. Most reviews seem to be pretty concise but I can't be that brief *sigh*

I like the voicemails. I know it has been done on the show, but they seem more like the type to leave several short 'thinking of you' notes instead of one overwrought message at the end of the day.

just how much she would miss him. It was like she could barely breathe. She'd worn blue to her first class, painted an ocean, and realized she might just be drowning.
Wow, exactly how it feels to miss someone. And Pam is painting what she feels instead of what she sees- hooray!

she missed him and she's tired and she just wants everything back
Perfect because even good change is hard and sometimes you want the familiar back (even if it means Dunder Mifflin :) )

Also, forgive me if this sounds a bit judgemental or condescending (it isn't), but wow. I can't believe you're only sixteen (glanced at your profile). I felt those things when I was that age, but there is no way I could have chosen the words to express myself outside of my thoughts. So this is admiration. I can't wait for the premiere either!