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Reviewer: flonkerton Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Still love it =)

Reviewer: cantdenytruelove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

GAH! I LOVE IT!!!

love it!!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this story. Jim rests his forehead against hers, closing his eyes as he rubs his hands over her arms and wonders when the world will ever stop spinning under his feet. Now that's just so good. 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh.  My.  Fogging up the windows of the Saab.  Niiiiice.

Reviewer: Corking Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww, yay! I love reading all the post-proposal stories that are up and noticing all the common threads they have. It's so, so nice.

This is great, and sexy, and ooh yes, they definitely had sex in the parking lot. Like, CLEARLY. Good work!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a celebration! 

I just love when Jim replies, "I don't know," he admits. "I've never really done this before."  Very sweet and hot at the same time.  Well done! :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow.  What a way to celebrate an engagement at a rest stop!  Very creative and very HOT. And you have to love Jim driving back to Scranton, and then all the way to NY. Great job!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the details, and I love how Pam curled herself around him at the end, SO cuteee and HOT.

More please :)

Reviewer: variella Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah. This is like, icing on top of the icing on the cake from last night. It's sweet and vivid; I really like your details of the rain you put in; cold, wet, the sounds it makes on the car. Great. :)

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