Date: October 26, 2008 09:29 am Title: Time
This was pretty perfect. Chapter 1 was great, beause it felt so true. That must have been exactly what the break up and those first few months alone must have been like, and your characterizations were spot on. And chapter 2...well, that was just icing on the cake, and I loved the time stamps.
Date: January 29, 2007 12:23 am Title: Time
WOW! This was the best Jim/Pam office fic I've ever read. The way you handled everything was so perfect. I don't mean to gush, but I really can't not gush. AMAZING!
9 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2006 09:50 pm Title: Time
Oh, this was so good. I especially liked the way you progressed through the second chapter, with just individual moments. And it was hot.
8 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2006 06:58 am Title: Time
IThis was sweet and hot and very well done. I think you've really nailed Pam's voice. And did I mention it was hot? Yeah, it was hot. Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 06:39 pm Title: Time
Perfect. Beautiful. Sexy. Warm. Complete.
You've reduced me to adjectives. Thank you for this.
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 01:49 pm Title: Time
I certainly hope their actual reunion goes this well. :-) Really nice job.
9 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 03:38 am Title: Time
This was so, so lovely. And I love the format, particularly in the second chapter with the time progression.
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 03:26 am Title: Space
Wow! That was just all kinds of awesome. I loved the little snippets of time in the second chapter. I just thought the whole thing was really realistic. Lovely, lovely writing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 10:11 pm Title: Time
*sighs happily*
What a lovely reconciliation. I love how they're jokey in the middle of serious moments, because that's so true to their relationship. And the last line? Kills me...in the good way.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 07:44 pm Title: Time
Kieyra, this is fantastic! The first chapter PAM POV and banter is great, and the second chapter- so sexy and sweet. I also love the "clock-watching' device in the second chapter, and you wrote the sex scenes so well: giving just enough information to make them steamy but still leave something to the imagination.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 07:43 pm Title: Time
Oh, I just loved this fic to pieces. So sweet and perfectly like both of them...you really rocked this one.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 06:32 pm Title: Time
Wow. All sorts of sweet, sexy hotness. Love the format that you used here with the little snippets of time--really kept up the momentum, and the whole thing was so in character. Just wonderful.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 06:29 pm Title: Space
This was perfect :) Loved the fight between Roy & Pam. Then loved the pseudo-fight between Jim & Pam. No one was quite right, no one was quite wrong--this was lovely!
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 04:59 pm Title: Time
OH MY GOSH!!!! This was amazing! Really wonderful work:)
9 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 03:21 pm Title: Time
Sweet, sexy, and in-character. This is lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 03:01 pm Title: Time
This is absolutely the best story I have read in a while. I just loved it. Heck, "Loved" doesn't even do it justice, it was a totally awesome, totally wonderful, totally romantic story with such a warm and extraordinaryily happy ending.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 01:54 pm Title: Time
This was simply amazing. Thanks so much for the wonderful fic.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 01:40 pm Title: Time
Great story. If only it could have happened this way.
Date: September 25, 2006 12:20 pm Title: Time
This has cheered me up immensely after thinking waaaay too much about "Big Tuna" all alone at his desk in Stamford. The "time" was a nice device to use for the"Time" chapter.
And the lovin' section had me begging my daughter to please be quiet for a minute so I could l finish the story.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 12:03 pm Title: Time
Beautiful story. I like the way Jim finally found out that she didn't get married and then confronted her about it. and the second chapter was beautiful- the end made me teary.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 11:36 am Title: Time
Okay, I honestly think that was one of the best - no, I KNOW it was one of the best - Jim/Pam finally get together scenarios I've ever read. You got their voices just right, and it's really so, so realistic - seriously. And I love the way you keep up with the time. This was just lovely, absolutely lovely.
Author's Response:
Whoa, I never noticed this 'respond' button before. I am not so smart sometimes.
Thanks a lot for the kind (and swift) feedback. :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm relatively new to the fandom and it was a lot of fun to write.
Date: September 25, 2006 11:33 am Title: Time
Excellent, especially the second chapter. Seems just right that they would talk and kiss and talk and do more and talk and just be together; just be "them".
Author's Response: Thank! Glad you liked it.
Author's Response:
Wow! Making a typo in a response to feedback is embarrassing!
:)
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 11:32 am Title: Time
Freaking awesome. Loved the time breakdowns. And this...
Press 1 for "I Just Need Some Space". Press 2 for "It's Not About Jim".
Priceless!
Author's Response: Thanks. Needless to say, I've spent too much time working phones myself. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 11:28 am Title: Space
WHOA! I really, really enjoyed this - particularly the ending. :o) (And you should know that I'm resisting temptation in leaving a review before I go to the next part....'cos I have a sneaking suspicion it's going to be good.) Really, though, you've captured their voices so well - and the fight with Pam and Roy was so painfully realistic, with just the perfect edge of humor. (I snorted out loud at the "Press 1 for I just need some more space.....")
Brilliant! Okay, off to part II - squee!
9 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 10:49 am Title: Time
Awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks!