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Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw.  This was really sweet, with the texting and the phone call.  And of course Andy was entertaining, as always.  I love the way Pam texts.  I'm the exact same way--totally anal about spelling and punctuation--which is why I never text.  :)

Reviewer: mixedberries Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha! This story made me laugh so muc. I can totally picture Andy being one of those guys that goes to bars when he's 30 something. Oh, Jim. I loved that Pam and Jim were texting back and forth. 

And running into Karen. Priceless!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this is great! It has the absurd humor and the angsty wistfulness of an episode. Stupid Pam. Stupid, stupid woman.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

How fun! What a cute idea.  And Jim saying "I miss you" after he had hung up was sad but promising.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great stuff! Are you continuing or may I just fill in the happy ending in my mind?!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

B.T. for Big Tuna? Hilarious! Very entertaining story. I'm unspoiled for the "Andy" character, but he seemed like such a freak in GWH that I can totally picture him like you've written him here.

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very fun and cute! Poor Jim stuck with a frat boy, and I love the little snippets of the Dundies we get through Pam. Wish there was more!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god - I loved that whole story!  My favorite part?  She won the OLD MAID dundee!!!  Awesome!!!  ....You are continuing this, aren't you?

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Jim reduced to hanging out in college bars playing beer pong!  I like your characterization of Andy. :)

Reviewer: loveleee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is awesome. Andy? Awesome. Karen? Awesome. They've had a collective 5 minutes of screentime but your characterization seems spot-on. And as a current college student familiar in the ways of beer pong...HEE!

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was great. Love how you characterized Andy - so true to what we've seen of him. I also liked how you reintroduced Karen - great job. Of course, the JAM call takes the cake. Poor Pam - Old Maid Dundie. I shouldn't be giggling at that, should I? Hope Jim and Pam can work things out in your world soon.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1

that was really great - he better call her tomorrow!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Love Big Tuna.  Andy is a hoot.

Reviewer: NightsInAugust Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Well done. And I'm not just saying that because I'm a college student. Please continue.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved the part between Jim and Karen. Really funny and v. Jim. Perfect distraction while waiting for Thurs. pm. More please!

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved this--it was just so much fun to read. Your characterizations seem spot-on (Andy, introducing Jim as B.T. Priceless!). Also loved the Jim/Karen and Jim/Pam interactions. Really excited to see how this progresses!

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 03:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww. Sweet. Very realistic. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 03:13 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm amazed at how quickly you've gotten Andy down.  Because that's EXACTLY how I picture him both in and out of the office.  The Bachelorette Party?   Too funny and the conversation w/Karen was sooooo  Jim.  And - sigh.  then there's my Jim and Pam.  Just...it just hurts is all.  But glad to see them in touch at the end at least.  Fabulous job.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 03:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Perfect.  Just like an episode, with all of the craziness, and just a little touch of sweetness and fluff thrown in.

Andy scares me.

I loved the conversation--just the right amount of comfort and awkwardness.

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