10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2009 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
so i just rewatched Fun Run today and it made me want to find corresponding fanfics for a little light evening reading, and i absolutely LOVED this.
This might possibly be my favorite line, ever:
" And it’s strange to see each other that way in the yellow light of day, but it’s kind of beautiful too."
Gawk. Amazing.
Date: July 02, 2009 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just simple, blissful happiness. :)
Date: November 02, 2008 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's very sweet and cute. I love how Pam is feeling a little shy, but yet is just beyond happy. It felt very realistic.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Morning Angel!!
8 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2008 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is pretty much what I'd imagine it would be like for Jim and Pam when they first began their relationship. The events of season three would cause awkwardness and hesitation as they became friends again, not to mention the strangeness and awkwardness of starting a relationship. You conveyed those feelings really well with nice detail in both Jim and Pam's body language. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
Date: October 22, 2008 03:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Love Pam feeling the intimacy of being alone in his room, unsupervised. In fact, this whole piece has a lovely warm, intimate, domestic feel. I like that they're a bit awkward, a little silly, little sexy - but just so happy to be there, together, finally. This was very nice to wake up to - so, thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Colette! I'm glad you enjoyed it!rnrn(I'll never forget the first time I spent the day alone in my boyfriend's apartment. It's like, "here. You have access to all my secrets, but I trust you to not barge into them." So nice. :) )
9 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2008 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great story! Absolutely adorable. The characterization is so well done and yes, fabulous icon!
"He reaches up one arm to scratch absently at the neck of his plain white shirt, and it’s pretty much the greatest morning of Pam’s life."
Yup, again...best icon ever. :) Thanks for the read!
Author's Response: Thank you! The icon's great, isn't it?
9 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2008 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet. I liked it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2008 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
short sweet and utterly perfect.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2008 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This?
"He looks bashful and content, and he’s smirking at her in a way that she knows means he’s thinking about each time he made her moan last night."
Oh my my my.
Well done, corking. What a charming vignette.
Author's Response: Thank you!! You're one of my favorite writers in this fandom, so your review really made my day. I really appreciate it! :)
Date: October 21, 2008 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Rowr. That does sound like a heavenly morning.
Author's Response: The best part of waking up is definitely Jim Halpert. If only we could be so lucky, amirite?
Date: October 21, 2008 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Short n' sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: October 21, 2008 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice. This hits the perfect Jim and Pam note - seems so true.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2008 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Sigh. This is lovely. I will think of it often as I tire away at work for the next 9 hours. Beautiful, truly. Hee.
Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad the story was able to help! Thank you!
Date: October 21, 2008 06:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This is beautiful. It feels filled with light, somehow. Two wonderful lines:
It’s more like how they were back before he went to Stamford, in the little moments when their eyes would meet and before her brain would whisper another man’s name.
A perfect description of then. And this is now:
He reaches up one arm to scratch absently at the neck of his plain white shirt, and it’s pretty much the greatest morning of Pam’s life.
Beautiful.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you said that about the light. I tried to mention light in lots of different ways throughout the story to try to convey brightness and stillness. I'm glad that it came through. Thanks so much for your review!
Date: October 21, 2008 04:07 am Title: Chapter 1
That last sentence was amazing--brought tears to my eyes.
Author's Response: Aww, really? I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
8 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2008 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, lovely. God, I love this point in the relationship when everything is all awkward and new, but so, so good. You convey that very well here. And I can understand how that particular picture inspired you. It's a very inspiring image. Thanks for sharing that bit of warm fuzzy this evening.
Author's Response: Yes, the image is breathtaking, isn't it? Oh, JKras... Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE this! So sweet, but it's written with such lovely details and observations, like the intimacy of being unsupervised in Jim's room. Just wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks nimblejack!