10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2009 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
The suspense is killing me (in a good way)!
Author's Response: Great - that means I'm going my job. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2009 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
What the heck is up with Ryan?
And ugh, I hate Alex. He's such a brown-noser.
Reading on.
Author's Response: Ryan is a little egomanic of a jerk. But poor Alex, he just wants to help.
10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2009 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
So I just got into this and I love it! I'm a sucker for suspense and I'm so anxious to figure out who the stalker is! And you know. For Jim to be okay. Yeah. Anyway, I hope you update this soon because it's so awesome! Seriously. :)
Author's Response: Thanks oobadnama, I'm having a really good time writing this one - I do enjoy twists. I have some time at the end of this week so I'm hoping to get the next chapter up by then. (Don't worry, I've already killed Jim off once, I wouldn't do it again - or would I?) *maniacial laughter*rnrnMany thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: January 05, 2009 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 4 Starry Starry Night
"Yeah," Jim said slowly as he shrugged his shoulders. "How do you suppose Van Gogh managed to paint this and not be in New York?" He took a second to enjoy the look on Alex's face. "Wait, there aren't even any stars in New York, are there?" Jim tried to keep at least a hint of humor in his voice. "Wouldn't have happened."
Best.Line.Ever. I missed this story! I cant wait for the next installment. These two sure can't catch a break!
Author's Response: Aw, man, lovefool, you just made my day. That was my favorite line/exchange in the story and I'm glad you "got" it.rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2009 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 Starry Starry Night
I have been looking for an update to this story!! I know the holiday's are a busy time and these updates take a lot of effort, but I so excited. My tow favorite shows are The Office and Prison Break...this gives me the wondeful characters from The Office but the action I crave like in PB. I can't wait for more!! Alex or whoever this is better not hurt Jim or Pam. He must of stolen Pam's keys from her coat and put something in her drink. JERK!! :P
Please update soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks SpunkyAR, I like mystery and action stuff too, so that's what I enjoy writing. I'll try to get this one concluded without another long gap.rnrnAlex is just being helpful, of course - I don't know what you have against the poor boy. We'll see what happens.rnrnThanks for sticking with it, and for the review.
Date: January 05, 2009 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 4 Starry Starry Night
i'm so happy to see you updated, i thought this would be lost!
this is great! poor jim. i never liked that alex person...mm.
Author's Response: Thanks, toyrundry, sorry I got waylayed by the holidays. Why, poor Alex has been nothing but helpful, has he? He just has Pam's best interests at heart, don't you know. rnrnAppreciate the read and the review.rnrn
9 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2009 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 Starry Starry Night
Jazzfan, my lawd, as I live and breath! So very happy to have an update to this great fic. Despite the gap, you sucked me right back in where you left off. The drama! The intrigue! The art students who appreciate Jim for the fine-looking man that he is! It's all good /Michael :)
Author's Response: *snicker* I had to throw in that random Jim compliment, poor boy's ego needed a little boost and you know art students aren't blind. Thanks for the encouragement!
Date: January 05, 2009 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 4 Starry Starry Night
Wow. If you're going where I think you're going, wow... and if not, you're going to knock me on my ass.
Author's Response: If you know where I'm going, please IM me. Because I'm not sure. I'm serious, I'd love a great idea. *grin*rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope I don't disappoint with the conclusion.
10 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2008 02:55 am Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
jazzfan, I don't like the tone of that "Friday night out?" question mark... but I really like angry!Jim, so keep that going ;) Great work
Author's Response: I love me some angry!Jim, why do you think I'm writing him? *grin* rn rnThanks so much for reading and reviewing, untherapy.
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2008 12:37 am Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
update
this is lovee
Author's Response: Thanks toyrundry. I'm working on Friday night.
Date: November 27, 2008 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
I'm still loving this story! What a prick that Ryan is...I think my favorite moment was when Dwight turned the tables and aimed the mace at Ryan -- just the perfect touch there. Love the bond between Jim and Dwight here. I can't wait for your next installment...bring on Friday night!
Author's Response: Aw thanks LoveFool, I'm glad you liked Dwight's response, because it felt right to me. And yup, Ryan did have Jim on his list, so I'm thinking he would take this opportunity.rnrnI appreciate your comments and thanks for reading.
Date: November 25, 2008 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
Intriguing, Jazzfan! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yikes, when I saw you'd read this I immediately went back and found three run on sentences. *grin* (I'm sure you would have improved this but thought you probably had plenty to do during the holidays, and I'd actually planned for this to be done quickly. Ha.)rnrnThanks, VB.
Date: November 25, 2008 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
Wow! Great story! I'm on the edge of my chair-- can't wait for more! Thanks!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it, tellsomebodyit (great nic, btw). Thanks for the review, I hope to have it done next week.
10 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2008 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
I HATE RYAN
i always have
this is wonderful
keep going
thanks
Author's Response: I enjoy disliking Ryan almost as much as Michael enjoys disliking Toby. rnThanks for reading and especially for the review!
Date: November 25, 2008 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Wow, what a fantastic story you have here. I love the angst/suspense and can't wait to see where you're going to take it. Please post more soon. :)
Author's Response: Somehow I missed this review before, my apologies. Thanks for the encouragement, and for reading and reviewing. Hope to have the next one up in a few days.
10 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2008 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
Yay, you updated!! I love seeing Jim all possesive over Pam. It's only cute when he does it. I can't wait to see what happens Friday night. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks SpunkyAR. After all, Ryan can't get any girl he wants, can he?rn*grin*rnrnAppreciate the review, I'll get on with it as soon as I get turkey day done. It's only a couple more chapters.
10 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2008 05:41 am Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
Yay, so happy you updated, even though it's obviously gone off from canon. I feel there may still be a twist here...?
Wow, Ryan really pulled out all the big guns didn't he. I hope Jim speaks to Pam about it. Can't wait for update :)
Author's Response: It departed from canon so fast that I was trying to decide what to do with it. In the end, I just decided to write the story that I'd started to write, because it wouldn't fit in canon. What the heck.rnrnI thought this was something Ryan would do if he got the chance, and he knew Jim would be good for his word, so he took his shot. (weasley little so and so...grrr)rnrnYes, there may be a twist or two yet. *grin* It ain't over 'til it's over.rnrnYour review is much appreciated - I'll get to "Friday night" as soon as I can. (got a herd to feed for turkey day though).
8 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2008 05:04 am Title: Chapter 3 Well You Needn't
One more reason to dislike Ryan. Still with the tension, jazzfan! Waiting anxiously for Friday night out...
Author's Response: Like we needed another reason. I thought it was in Ryan's character to let Jim have it when he knew he was safe. I'm sure he remembers that voice mail, afterall, and he has vindictive type written all over him. He has a list, for Pete's sake. And yup, Friday's coming.rnThanks for reading and reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 10:51 am Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
Jim is going to be out of his mind with worry for Pam. I hope this psycho leaves her alone. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love this story so far!! :)
Author's Response: Yes, Jim will worry but he'll also do some figuring. He's a smart guy, afterall.rnrnThanks for the review, very much appreciated!
Date: November 12, 2008 05:20 am Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
This is great! The suspense is palpable.
Author's Response: Thanks katiej. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate your comments.
Date: November 11, 2008 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
I love this! As always your writing is great. It's very suspenseful and has me speculating all sorts of crazy things about Ryan and Alex.
I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you lpy4704, I'm glad you're speculating, that makes the writing more fun.rnI really appreciate the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2008 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Yikes. So, is this a nefarious evil plan where Ryan and Alex have teamed up to ruin Jim and Pam? (Sorry, I just finished reading Dennis Lehane's "Darkness, Take My Hand" which features a crazy triple villain scenario and my mind is just going crazy). Please have Jim shoot Ryan to death at some point, will you? Cool story and great title, Jazzy! I love that song...
Author's Response: Ryan and Alex? Wait, how about Kevin?
Date: November 10, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
OMG, you have to get it done NOW! lol. This has seriously got me on the edge of my seat. You really know how to up your stakes. Love it!....and Ryan - ICK.
Author's Response: Thanks LoveFool. I hope to get it done in a couple of days, it's not a long story (as soon as I can get a few real life things attended to)rnrnYeah Ryan is always just -ICK. The question is, how ICK?rnrnYour review is very appreciated!
Date: November 10, 2008 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Oooh I am SO sucked in right now. So glad you've already posted chapter 2! Oh man when Jim told her to call Alex, I literally put a hand to my heart...he loves her SO much! Uh...ok, on to chapter 2.
Author's Response: Oh, you made my morning. I'm so glad you "got" that about Jim sucking it up and telling her to call Alex. It was my favorite part. *SapsRUs*rnrnThanks, LoveFool.
Date: November 10, 2008 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
Oh...I am intrigued! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Jinxcoke, I'm glad you're intrigued. I've got a few "real life" things to attend to for a couple of days, and then I'll finish it. I want to see what happens. *snort*rnrnI really appreciate the review.