8 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
What a nice surprise, jazzfan! First off, love the song that I'm assuming the title references. I like this--very suspenseful. I feel nervous! That Ryan is such a little dick. Grrr.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: You should feel nervous. I'm also glad you like the song. The second chapter song is actually quite nice too, it's from "Sweeney Todd". *grin*rnrnThanks a bunch for the review, NanReg.
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Wow! Awesome. That gave me the shivers reading that! I can't wait for the next chapters. Ryan seems creepy, maybe he knows something, and Alex was suspiciously close by!
Author's Response: Ryan is always creepy. LOL I'm excited that it gave you the shivers, though. The thot plickens.rnrnBig thank you for the review, Noodles.
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
I hope it isn't Alex lmao :(
Author's Response: I didn't think Alex was such a bad guy in the episode either, what can I say? There a lot of people in New York. A lot of people. /KevrnrnThanks for reviewing, Hannah_Halpert.
Date: November 10, 2008 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
I have a theory... it's alex right?? cause he was close by? wow, im addicted!
Author's Response: Mwahahahahaha. <-- Evil laugh. You'll have to read and find out. (I don't have a long story planned)rnrnSeriously, thanks for the review Beaky22. rn
Date: November 10, 2008 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
ooh...I have certain suspicions.
Author's Response: Hah! As well you should.rnrnThanks for the review, andtheivy.
Date: November 10, 2008 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark
Whoa! Nice work! I didn't take a breath the whole time! You did a great job building and maintaining the tension and I can see this going a number of different ways - all of them really exciting and twisted. Looking forward to an update!
Author's Response: Thanks Sweetpea, I'm glad the whole tension thing worked for you. Hmm, which way will this go? LOL I appreciate the review!