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Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 10:41 am Title: Once upon a time...

This is simply amazing - just amazing.  Jim's "as you wish" when he let go of her hands....guh.  And their goodbye was also so bittersweet.  You are AWESOME.  You have yet to write something that doesn't just either hit me hard in the gut or make me squee with delight.  Can't wait for the rest of this!

Author's Response: Rock on, thanks, girl7!

Reviewer: your lesser half Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 10:10 am Title: Once upon a time...

You Rock! Pam is not the only person i know who is a sneaky kind ofpretty. Great line. Love Ya.



Author's Response: Whee - Thanks, babe!  Love you too ;)

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 08:40 am Title: Once upon a time...

So cute!  I love the girl and the grandpa (Ryan?) and since Princess Bride is like the awesomest movie (and book) ever...yeah, this rocks.



Author's Response: Thanks, Lissa!  :)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 06:42 am Title: Once upon a time...

Wow I love this and how you it wrote it ina Princess Bride fashion.

Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona! It helps that I just watched Princess Bride in order to map the story. So it's still fresh :)

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 05:56 am Title: Once upon a time...

Wow, I really really love this already, and I'm pleasantly surprised at how well the two stories mesh together! And describing Pam as a sneaky kind of pretty. Wow, I can't even review coherently, just know that it's great!



Author's Response: Ha, thanks, pennylane!  I wasn't sure at first where I was going to begin the story, till I remembered PB starts with a kiss - then it was obvious :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 05:19 am Title: Once upon a time...

You have managed to meld the styles of The Office and The Princess Bride perfectly together.  I am just so impressed.  This is shaping up to be a wonderful, wonderful story! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Gen! :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 05:01 am Title: Once upon a time...

OK. You manage to have the tone of the show, and the tone of the book/movie down perfectly. How do you do that? This is sooo wonderful already.

Author's Response: Thanks, Lis! I'm glad it sounds right both ways.  :)

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 04:53 am Title: Once upon a time...

I love you. This was fantastic! The way you work in the little breaks works so well--loved the one about how Pam was crazy to turn Jim down twice.

And even just seeing Jim say "As you wish" gave me the shivers :)

Author's Response: Glad you like those breaks!  I know a few gals who'd like to hear Jim say that on the show. Thanks, yippee :)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 04:07 am Title: Once upon a time...

OMG.  I did not think it was possible to love this story more. 

But I think I just might. :)  

It's off to a most spectacular start. 



Author's Response: Excellent, thanks, Krissy!  ;)

Reviewer: neptune1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 10:39 pm Title: Once upon a time...

The "As you wish" after the kiss: it truly sums up Jim's attitude there (I never would have thought the two stories would mesh so perfectly!).  I think you've precisely captured what he really meant by his "ok:" that he truly cares about Pam's happiness more than his own. 



Author's Response: When I rewatched the kiss and the okay, I saw his little smile (hadn't seen that the first time), and realized the same thing: "As you wish."  Thanks, neptune!  ;)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 06:01 pm Title: Prologue

Great twist on the title!  This is going to be another awesome story of yours, I just know it!!   (And yea for Hope being #1 on the JAM fan fic list!!) 

Author's Response: Thanks, thanks, and thanks!  Glad you're looking forward to it, Karen ;)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 05:27 pm Title: Prologue

It's times like this that I really wish I'd seen The Princess Bride. I think I'll rent it this weekend finally. Will I get this story until then?

Author's Response: Oh, yeah, you'll get it, but it'll mean A LOT more if you watch or read Princess Bride. Which you should do, because it rocks tube socks. Thanks, Luna ;)

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 05:16 pm Title: Prologue

Aw. Ryan (I'm pretty sure) telling the story of Jim and Pam? Sounds amazing to me.

Author's Response: Thanks, proposals! ;)

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 05:06 pm Title: Prologue

Oh, you tease!  That's all we get?  I can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Hee, more soon!  Thanks, Lissa ;)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 02:52 pm Title: Prologue

Whee!  I can't wait to read more. :)


Author's Response:

More soon ;)  Thanks, Gen!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 02:17 pm Title: Prologue

Wheeee!!!! I am so excited!  It is FATE that I'm starting this story today; I'm wearing my "As You Wish" button as I type.

"Your grandmother's killing me." 

*sings* I can guess whoooo that is!



Author's Response:

*hee hee*   Fate rocks!  Thanks, Beth ;)

Reviewer: ella eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 01:30 pm Title: Prologue

oh oh oh i am so excited for this!

 

and at first, i immediatley thought the H's had to be Jim...but, Ryan Howard.....and I'm sure there are other H's that I can't think of.  But I love the Princess Bride and I can't wait for this story!



Author's Response: So many Hs!  ;)  Glad you're excited!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 01:06 pm Title: Prologue

Is it ridiculous that my heart gave a leap at the "H" on his cufflinks?  My god, this is going to be SUCH an incredible story - I can't wait for the rest of it!

Author's Response: Hee hee ;)  Glad you're psyched about it, girl7!

Reviewer: Rose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 12:37 pm Title: Prologue

I giggle insanely in anticipation.

It's really quite frightening. 



Author's Response: Heh, glad you're looking forward to it, Rose!  ;)

Reviewer: Thor1066 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 11:42 am Title: Prologue

So little written & I already find this Grandpa VERY sexy...

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thanks, Thor1066!  Sexy, eh?  ;)

Reviewer: neptune1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 11:35 am Title: Prologue

Yay!  Finally!  I'm so excited for the rest of this- and I can't wait to see how the story is told from Jim's perspective.  Just, yay! (I know, so articulate)

Author's Response: Articulate enough!  Thanks, neptune  ;)

Reviewer: janelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 11:31 am Title: Prologue

oooh, the princess bride meets the office :) this is really cute so far, and i loved the little detail of the H cufflinks that made me know it was jim.  the idea of jim and pam having a granddaughter is squee-worthy. i can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks, janelle, I'm glad you like it!

But Jim isn't the only "H" around.  ;)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 11:17 am Title: Prologue

I must confess, I'm not a huge PB addict. But I am a big fan of true love! Carry on!



Author's Response: Thanks, Par5!  Will do...

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 11:09 am Title: Prologue

Bouncing with anticipation here. I squeed when I saw you posted this. Off to a really good start. Can't wait for more.

Still bouncing.



Author's Response: Thanks, TV Buffy! On the bouncing: me, too. I finally got a handle on this, and I'm excited ;)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 10:45 am Title: Prologue

I am nearly giddy with anticipation to dig into this story. I think I'm going to love Grandpa, here, too. ;)

 

 



Author's Response: I am LOVING writing the grandfather-granddaughter scenes. Thanks, Lis!

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