10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2006 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job! I loved how Jim was motivated by the sight of Dwight and Angela - nice, creative touch. Also, the last line was perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks! I think that there is a lot of Jim in the way Dwight feels about Angela. The last line was the first thing that came into my head about this idea because I honestly feel that Jim wouldn't care how horribly it turned out as long as he got it out in the open.
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2006 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a sweet, sweet story. I just loved the last line. So perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you! I totally stole it from the title of the story, which I had stolen from a Kelly Clarkson song! To me it fit the moment better than anything else. I'm glad you think so too.
9 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2006 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yep. This is exactly how that moment felt. Even now that we know what came next, you still capture that sense of tense anticipation.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Even knowing what came after the kiss dosn't make that feeling any different. Jim loves Pam and he just wanted her to know, even though it didn't end up how he wanted it to. I'm so glad that you think I did the moment in the show justice. Thanks!