Date: September 26, 2009 03:23 pm Title: But you've been loved
Awww. Cute!
Date: November 30, 2008 08:20 pm Title: But you've been loved
They're so sweet. Lovely little glimpse of them being domestic and so, so happy.
Date: November 29, 2008 12:34 pm Title: But you've been loved
Great work. I can totally picture Pam attacking the clown painting with household tools.
9 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2008 12:03 pm Title: But you've been loved
I loved this. I loved the flashes of thoughts to the future. The way you write Jim really makes me melt. Great work.
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2008 05:49 pm Title: But you've been loved
Perfect!! :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2008 11:53 pm Title: But you've been loved
Eeeeeeeeeeeeep that was so lovely. I love how his mom wanted the garage for herself, and that that gave Jim the idea, it made me all warm inside hehe. Seriously was so good, I love how she managed to get the painting off the wall lol.
Date: November 25, 2008 08:49 pm Title: But you've been loved
I love so much about this moment in time. You've created such an unbelievably intimate mood here. I love the flashbacks to what really cinched the deal for Jim as he was listening to his mom talk about having wanted a space of her own...PERFECT. Such a realistic turn to take in terms of a young guy wanting to maybe do something his father didn't get to do. And the moment at the end with Pam and the butter knife and the kissing the hell out of her...perfect. Well done.
Date: November 25, 2008 08:07 pm Title: But you've been loved
I love Pam taking ownership of the house and getting the clown off the wall! Great job!
Date: November 25, 2008 07:41 pm Title: But you've been loved
I was so happy to find this little gem tonight. It was so heartfelt and sincere. I can just imagine Jim's poor mother in that house full of devious boys. And Jim's thought of giving Pam the space his mother had always wanted. I could just feel his love for her coming off the page. And the final scene of Pam trying to pry off that clown painting was wonderful. It's a sign that she's already started to think of the place as her home too. Really lovely.
Date: November 25, 2008 10:31 am Title: But you've been loved
This is just lovely. Old houses are like an archeological dig, aren't they?
8 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2008 10:14 am Title: But you've been loved
So happy to read this, bashert. Such sweet ideas--Jim's mom and her never-realized space, the sleeping bag, Pam trying to remove the painting from the wall and then Jim helping her. Nice work.
Date: November 25, 2008 09:00 am Title: But you've been loved
I wouldn't mind seeing that scene of Pam trying to pry the clown picture off the wall as part of an upcoming episode. She could turn to the camera and just give it and all of us a sly look...since she wouldn't have discussed it with Jim!!! Good job!