10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2010 06:58 pm Title: The strawberry pie incident
Really, there are no words, just one big dopey grin on my face. That was so incredibly adorable, the entire proposal's that weren't, strawberry pie, the actual proposal, all fabulous, I just love it! I'm planning on starting from chapter 1 again tomorrow when I'm at work, in preparation for the final chapters you have for us.
Author's Response: Thanks! I should have mentioned, the strawberry pie incident actually happened to me. Except as an added bonus, I'd also picked the strawberries myself. Fortunately the crust still tasted amazing. Unfortunately, dropping the innards of a pie on to the kitchen floor did motivate anyone to propose to me.
Date: February 21, 2010 04:26 pm Title: This is the way you get the milk
great chapter i really loved the flash backs. i cant wait for more :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2010 12:16 pm Title: This is the way you get the milk
Well, this review ain't like being fed pizza by Jim & shower sex, but hopefully it'll satisfy the non-pervy side of you :P
I'm so happy that we finally know what happened that night in the kitchen!! I love the flashbacks and how it filled us in on these little things that I've been wanting to know about these two. So glad they're moving in together!
This chapter made me laughed, sighed, and just plain happy. And that part in the end? Niiiice. /Kevin
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I considered not having them move in, out of respect to Pam's "Chair Model" speech about how she wasn't going to live with someone unless she was engaged, but there was some reason they had to move in...
Right, naked Jim asking her to shack up. That's it. Very highbrow, indeed.
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2010 11:49 am Title: This is the way you get the milk
Heee loved the flashbacks and stuff, worked really well :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2010 11:18 am Title: This is the way you get the milk
Lol, wow, that last scene was hilarious! Actually the last two, I cracked up when I thought that Jim was going to be feeding Pam pizza like a lion feeding her cubs. Okay, that's gross now - yes, I'll shut up!
Also, I did find one typo - you had a 'to' before and after a word, but I'm sorry - I can't remember where it was. I should have written it down... But just FYI, there is one somewhere (and I know that it's towards the right side of the page, if that helps!).
Anyways, great chapter, very well written and funny and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I went back and fixed it. I also realized I'd messed up the apartment numbers, so I switched that as well.
Date: February 20, 2010 07:32 am Title: Smelden and the Muffin
Ooh, love the flashbacks and the new stuff and really loved the neighhbors noticing how in love they are - I guess I loved everything about it... :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2010 07:31 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Let it go on record that bkwrm did not pester/annoy/beg andtheivy for the gratuitous smut of this chapter ;o) But nevertheless, I'm happy about it. The intimate moments between them was muy caliente! But also sweet, especially the way each of them prepared the special Valentine for the other.
Oh, and no cookies for you! Only because I'm not really a Girl Scout :D I would love some of those cookies though. They're so addicting. Makes me wonder if it's laced w/ crack or something ;o)
Author's Response: Hey, I'll take gratuitous smut requests anytime.
Heroin. I think the Thin Mints are laced with heroin.
Author's Response: Hey, I'll take gratuitous smut requests anytime.
Heroin. I think the Thin Mints are laced with heroin.
Date: February 15, 2010 05:08 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Great chapter! I love Jim cooking for Pam and trying to make a nice Valentine's Day celebration for her. And of course, Pam going cheesy is fun too. So glad they're together now :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I couldn't decide if I wanted to write mockingly cheesy or classic romantic. Actually both are pretty cheesy, but Pam did it on purpose.
Date: February 15, 2010 11:08 am Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
ha, these kids are like rabbits. love this story.
Author's Response: 20 some odd years built up between them. Once the juice is loose, it ain't stop flowin'.
I have no earthly idea what that means, but it felt Michaelish.
Date: February 14, 2010 09:15 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
AND THIS WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2010 07:09 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
hot hot hot
meow :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! The original outline had no sex in this chapter, but those horny little devils couldn't be stopped.
Date: February 14, 2010 12:46 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Aww 4 chapters left! :( well I'll miss this story once you're done! I'll definitely read anything else you write! I really love your writing style.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've got some ideas rattling around.
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2010 11:57 am Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Eh hem... wow. Fluff and steam much??? Lol, that was, uh... interesting... keep going! I loved the scene on the phone with Jim's parents, Larissa saying Jim was making a cake and Jim's dad's reaction, lol! Great story! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, I like to fluff and steam like a laundromat.
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2010 11:09 am Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Awww! So adorable! I love these two! I can't wait for another update and I hope you continue this story for a long time!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Actually, the story is starting to wind down (4 chapters left), but I'm starting to think of ideas for other ones, so I hope you'll read other things I have to offer. And I wouldn't be opposed to the idea of a sequel to this one, if I could work out how to do it well.
Date: February 13, 2010 09:06 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Gahhh I love this story. I know I should say something more constructive than that, but I just...love this story. Hot, funny and sweet, all rolled into one. I believe that's called Swehonny. Or Fuswot. Or smuff. Either way, I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouragement! This chapter was very different from how it was originally planned, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2010 07:27 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Yay for Valentine's Day updates!
Yay for updates in general!
I promise to stop begging for updates now!
hehe... sorry about those by the way.
Author's Response: It's encouraging to know that someone looks forward to new chapters of this story. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2010 06:55 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......... *blushes*
"Holy crap, did Valentine's Day throw up in here?" HA!
and i loved “The Rabbit died. And not in a pregnancy sort of way.” it took me a sec to get it. nice!
Author's Response: Thanks. That was also a little shout out to "Golden Girls."
Sophia: I think I'm pregnant.
Dorothy: What happened, the rabbit died laughing?
(Yes, I know that line was an homage to "Maude")
Date: February 12, 2010 09:33 am Title: Smelden and the Muffin
*michael scott voice* I demand an update! just kidding!
(that wassupposed to be a play on the 'i declare bankruptcy' bit. it didnt work very well. haha)
but seriously though, update very soon. I am dying here! :)
Date: February 10, 2010 02:18 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
So...just read this chapter again (what?!?) and I think after this wonderfully dirty & smutty chapter, I would love to read sweet intimate moments. I'm actually up for anything that you want to give us ;o)
Oh, and I realized how annoying I can be w/ the constant begging for smut so I'll stop. Promise! Girl Scout's honor and all that :D
Author's Response: No, no, it's actually really helps to know what people want. A lot of times I have broad strokes worked out, but not details, so it's good for me to know.
However, if you are a Girl Scout, will you send me some cookies?
10 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2010 01:10 am Title: Unleashing the beast
I just read this story for the first time and I am totally hooked. Awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. Hope to hear from you again.
Date: February 08, 2010 09:33 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
As soon as I saw you talk about this on the boards I was like "I have to go find this chapter filled with shameful smut!" It's taken me a while to be able to fix my brain (which you broke) enough write a proper review. Jiminy crickets and all that is holy, this was HOT. Like fans-self-furiously-and-needs-cold-shower hot.
Please write smut more often, I don't care about Catholic shame. I think if it's for innocent entertainment, it doesn't matter. More, I tell ya! The people want more!! Give the people (read: me) what they want!
Author's Response: Eh, I'm young. I have time to redeem my eternal soul. In fact... how about a story called "Jim and Pam Complete the Kama Sutra?"
Just kidding. Kind of. ;-)
Thanks for the support and your words!
Date: February 08, 2010 07:01 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
btw i love the fast updates i love love this story
Author's Response: Thanks. :-) I really appreciate you saying so. I'm having fun writing it.
Date: February 08, 2010 06:53 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
wow great chapter! cant wait for more :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2010 06:49 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
Woah, was not expecting smut that quickly. I'm not complaining or anything, though. ;)
I feel like I need to go confession after reading that, and I am Catholic. haha!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah I definitely feel a little guilty about writing that. But hey, there was demand for smut... 'give the people what they want,' right?
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2010 06:48 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
hi *waves* wow. speechless. kudos.
Author's Response: Thanks :-)