Date: February 20, 2010 07:32 am Title: Smelden and the Muffin
Ooh, love the flashbacks and the new stuff and really loved the neighhbors noticing how in love they are - I guess I loved everything about it... :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2010 07:31 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Let it go on record that bkwrm did not pester/annoy/beg andtheivy for the gratuitous smut of this chapter ;o) But nevertheless, I'm happy about it. The intimate moments between them was muy caliente! But also sweet, especially the way each of them prepared the special Valentine for the other.
Oh, and no cookies for you! Only because I'm not really a Girl Scout :D I would love some of those cookies though. They're so addicting. Makes me wonder if it's laced w/ crack or something ;o)
Author's Response: Hey, I'll take gratuitous smut requests anytime.
Heroin. I think the Thin Mints are laced with heroin.
Author's Response: Hey, I'll take gratuitous smut requests anytime.
Heroin. I think the Thin Mints are laced with heroin.
Date: February 15, 2010 05:08 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Great chapter! I love Jim cooking for Pam and trying to make a nice Valentine's Day celebration for her. And of course, Pam going cheesy is fun too. So glad they're together now :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I couldn't decide if I wanted to write mockingly cheesy or classic romantic. Actually both are pretty cheesy, but Pam did it on purpose.
Date: February 15, 2010 11:08 am Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
ha, these kids are like rabbits. love this story.
Author's Response: 20 some odd years built up between them. Once the juice is loose, it ain't stop flowin'.
I have no earthly idea what that means, but it felt Michaelish.
Date: February 14, 2010 09:15 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
AND THIS WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2010 07:09 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
hot hot hot
meow :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! The original outline had no sex in this chapter, but those horny little devils couldn't be stopped.
Date: February 14, 2010 12:46 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Aww 4 chapters left! :( well I'll miss this story once you're done! I'll definitely read anything else you write! I really love your writing style.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've got some ideas rattling around.
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2010 11:57 am Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Eh hem... wow. Fluff and steam much??? Lol, that was, uh... interesting... keep going! I loved the scene on the phone with Jim's parents, Larissa saying Jim was making a cake and Jim's dad's reaction, lol! Great story! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, I like to fluff and steam like a laundromat.
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2010 11:09 am Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Awww! So adorable! I love these two! I can't wait for another update and I hope you continue this story for a long time!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Actually, the story is starting to wind down (4 chapters left), but I'm starting to think of ideas for other ones, so I hope you'll read other things I have to offer. And I wouldn't be opposed to the idea of a sequel to this one, if I could work out how to do it well.
Date: February 13, 2010 09:06 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Gahhh I love this story. I know I should say something more constructive than that, but I just...love this story. Hot, funny and sweet, all rolled into one. I believe that's called Swehonny. Or Fuswot. Or smuff. Either way, I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouragement! This chapter was very different from how it was originally planned, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2010 07:27 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
Yay for Valentine's Day updates!
Yay for updates in general!
I promise to stop begging for updates now!
hehe... sorry about those by the way.
Author's Response: It's encouraging to know that someone looks forward to new chapters of this story. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2010 06:55 pm Title: Hearts and rabbits and monkeys, oh my
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......... *blushes*
"Holy crap, did Valentine's Day throw up in here?" HA!
and i loved “The Rabbit died. And not in a pregnancy sort of way.” it took me a sec to get it. nice!
Author's Response: Thanks. That was also a little shout out to "Golden Girls."
Sophia: I think I'm pregnant.
Dorothy: What happened, the rabbit died laughing?
(Yes, I know that line was an homage to "Maude")
Date: February 12, 2010 09:33 am Title: Smelden and the Muffin
*michael scott voice* I demand an update! just kidding!
(that wassupposed to be a play on the 'i declare bankruptcy' bit. it didnt work very well. haha)
but seriously though, update very soon. I am dying here! :)
Date: February 10, 2010 02:18 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
So...just read this chapter again (what?!?) and I think after this wonderfully dirty & smutty chapter, I would love to read sweet intimate moments. I'm actually up for anything that you want to give us ;o)
Oh, and I realized how annoying I can be w/ the constant begging for smut so I'll stop. Promise! Girl Scout's honor and all that :D
Author's Response: No, no, it's actually really helps to know what people want. A lot of times I have broad strokes worked out, but not details, so it's good for me to know.
However, if you are a Girl Scout, will you send me some cookies?
10 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2010 01:10 am Title: Unleashing the beast
I just read this story for the first time and I am totally hooked. Awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. Hope to hear from you again.
Date: February 08, 2010 09:33 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
As soon as I saw you talk about this on the boards I was like "I have to go find this chapter filled with shameful smut!" It's taken me a while to be able to fix my brain (which you broke) enough write a proper review. Jiminy crickets and all that is holy, this was HOT. Like fans-self-furiously-and-needs-cold-shower hot.
Please write smut more often, I don't care about Catholic shame. I think if it's for innocent entertainment, it doesn't matter. More, I tell ya! The people want more!! Give the people (read: me) what they want!
Author's Response: Eh, I'm young. I have time to redeem my eternal soul. In fact... how about a story called "Jim and Pam Complete the Kama Sutra?"
Just kidding. Kind of. ;-)
Thanks for the support and your words!
Date: February 08, 2010 07:01 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
btw i love the fast updates i love love this story
Author's Response: Thanks. :-) I really appreciate you saying so. I'm having fun writing it.
Date: February 08, 2010 06:53 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
wow great chapter! cant wait for more :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2010 06:49 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
Woah, was not expecting smut that quickly. I'm not complaining or anything, though. ;)
I feel like I need to go confession after reading that, and I am Catholic. haha!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah I definitely feel a little guilty about writing that. But hey, there was demand for smut... 'give the people what they want,' right?
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2010 06:48 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
hi *waves* wow. speechless. kudos.
Author's Response: Thanks :-)
Date: February 08, 2010 06:22 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
My goodness! Dirty yet.... entertaining. Wow. That was... good...! Lol. I must admit, as much as this was fantastic, I really like the chapters like the previous one the best, when they're just being Jim and Pam - picking out ties for example. I guess I actually like both styles of chapter content. I can't wait for the next chapter, great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's hard to accurately imagine what they're really like behind closed doors together. Plus no couple is always sweet or always wild. I imagine that Jim and Pam can get a little crazy from time to time, so this is definitely a portrayal of their more daring sides. But as a rule, my favorite thing to write is the banter, that line of communication between them that says no matter what, they'll always be best friends (thus not being able to resist the urge to add a little in at the end).
That also comes more naturally. This... let's just say I had to dig into every bag of dirty tricks I had.
Date: February 08, 2010 01:58 pm Title: Unleashing the beast
I should be docked points for reading this during class. Just a tad distracting ..
Author's Response: You read this during class?! Egads!
Date: February 08, 2010 09:54 am Title: Unleashing the beast
We regret to inform you that bkwrm's brain has exploded. :D
Wow...ask and we shall receive. I know I should have something more to say except omgomgomgomgomg....JAM smut. You certainly satisfied my prurient fantasies when it comes to Jim and Pam ;o)
This whole chapter was hot, dirty, wonderful, absolutely worth waiting for! And the need and want that they have for each other is...gah! Great job! Ummm...would it be too much to ask for encores? *puppy eyes and whimpering* I mean, we skipped quite a bit in their relationship :D
Author's Response: Wow, nice use of prurient. :-) So...in answer to your question, yes, there will be at least two more "adult" scenes, but I have to ask: do y'all like 'em sweet or dirty? Because it affects how I'll write certain things.
Oh, and not to fear, their first time will be revealed.
Date: February 08, 2010 09:40 am Title: Unleashing the beast
I guess heaven is no longer a cornfield in
Iowa! Funny. What a nice lunchtime read.
Author's Response: If you build it, Jim will come?
Or...something.
Glad you enjoyed; thanks so much for reading!
Date: February 07, 2010 04:44 pm Title: Just a boring old trip to Boscov's
cut his penis off??? lol pleasedont let her do that
Author's Response: No, I wouldn't. I think people on this board would kill me. There's too much love for Jim's penis here for that to be a forgivable action.