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Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2016 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2008 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done and so sad, omg I wanted to cuddle poor Pam aw :(

Author's Response: Aw thanks! ;)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2008 06:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Such sadness! 

She wants to feel his arms around her and hold her close. She wants to fall asleep with his gentle breathing brushing against her hair. She wants to hear silence again. She wants the constant noise to cease and hear nothing but his heart beat against her ear.  Lovely paragraph.

 Nice work, dmscranton!



Author's Response: Thank you! For reading and reviewing, I appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice! I really liked this. Very sweet and to the point. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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