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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2009 09:08 pm Title: realizing dreams

Nice ending. Or, nice chapter before the one you write from Pam's POV. Either way it's nice.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2009 09:07 pm Title: realizing the importance of going all in... again

"I can't run from this anymore, Pam. I'm still in love with you. I still love you. And I miss being your best friend. These past few months... I've been running from those feelings, and I'm tired-"

Wow. Best phone conversation ever!!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2009 09:00 pm Title: realizing mistakes

"...like the one he'd just had on "the importance of commitment and not telling lies."

Great line.  I like that your S3 Jim is realizing he might be able to change things much sooner than the actual S3 Jim.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2009 08:56 pm Title: realizing change

Congrats on your first fic! Reading this brought back S3 feelings for me - and although I always figured Karen and Jim's late night talks took place in bed, I like your idea that they took place on the phone much better!

Author's Response: I always thought Jim and Karen would have these talks over the phone because I thought Karen would be really insecure about having them. That's basically why she made Jim talk to her like that, because she wasn't confident in their relationship. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2009 03:34 pm Title: realizing dreams

Aw! I loved that, I hope it's not over though. ;)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2008 07:09 pm Title: realizing conflict

You did NOT just stop the chapters there. AHHH! I want to find out what happens next! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Don't worry, chapter 4 is on its way! Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2008 07:04 pm Title: realizing mistakes

Wow, I so wish this had happened on the show. I mean them getting back together sooner, I know Jim eventually realized he was being a jackass and Karen was a pain.

Reading on. :)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2008 07:01 pm Title: realizing change

Simple, well-put, and short (which is a good thing). I'm loving this so far! :)

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2008 05:56 pm Title: realizing conflict

Yay!! He is going to call Pam!! I can't wait for more!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2008 05:37 pm Title: realizing mistakes

I love this look into Jim's mind during season 3. A lot of people want to put the blaim on Pam for everything that happened, but I Totally agree with you on everything in this!! Jim ran away without giving Pam any time to think and then he was mean to her. Can't wait to see where you go with this. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it seems like everyone wanted to look at what Pam was thinking with her growth throughout season 3, but I thought it was important to see both sides. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2008 05:18 am Title: realizing change

Great start! Welcome to the addictive world of writing fic!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sure it is addictive...

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