Date: January 17, 2009 07:53 pm Title: Groom's Speech
So sweet. I think about Michael's words to Jim that night and they really warm my heart. Well done with the story.
7 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2009 10:44 pm Title: Groom's Speech
I'm really sorry, but I think it's hella tacky for a groom to mention his wife's previous fiance in a toast, especially by name. And I really don't think Jim would do it.
Your story was well written, and I'd love to see you write more!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I understand what you mean. I have now removed Jim's direct reference to Roy.
8 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2009 01:57 pm Title: Groom's Speech
So glad you felt inspired to write, johngaltstrikes! I hope it's the first fic of many. Very sweet. Nice job!
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2009 01:17 pm Title: Groom's Speech
Nice first fanfic. I loved Jim mentioning Michael in his speech - that was awesome and so perfect.
I look forward to seeing you around here :p
Date: January 04, 2009 11:19 am Title: Groom's Speech
I love how Michael gets credit where credit is due in this story. It would make his year if Jim would mention him in the wedding toast for sure. :) Welcome to fanfic...it's too much fun!