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Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2009 12:41 pm Title: I'm So Ready

wicked awesome, yet again (:

&& your like 'reviews are like' are killing me with love.

Reviewer: variella Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2009 12:12 pm Title: I'm So Ready

I lol'd out loud at Lord knows waiting was something she and Jim had the ability go pro at.
Gold medals for sure.

Reviewer: pam_beesly Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2009 11:04 am Title: I'm So Ready

I really loved the comparisons between Roy and Jim, especially this line:

Jim... who had hurt her by refusing her, but had saved her from everything else

I know what it feels like to have someone like that; you described it perfectly.

Reviewer: toyrundry Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 06:25 pm Title: Something More

this is perfect. this is a perfect chapter. i saw what you were saying, i could see it, very vivid, i love that in stories.

now, uh, it's time for some ass kicking. or threat making. or small pushes. or shotguns. just kidding about the shotguns.

thanks for the hat, reference, really. now i have to go find all my pictures of him wearing such a thing. ruin my night, why dontcha lol ;)

Reviewer: toyrundry Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 06:20 pm Title: Six Months Ago Is Not Today

awwwww!
you made my day with the shout out.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 01:36 pm Title: Something More

I liked this chapter.

keep the happy going (:

Reviewer: drewbers Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 01:17 pm Title: Something More

I have been following this story since you first posted, but haven't had a chance to review. I think you are doing a great job! The last chapter was a good balance to all the angst and drama of the previous chs.

I am interested to see what happens when Roy comes looking for Pam. (I hope Jim does some ass kicking!) I am also interested to see what happens with Karen.

Reviewer: elliehalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 12:36 pm Title: Something More

Ahhh, I thought it was over for a second. Yay for more!
I could totally see that dream sequence perfectly (fifty points for the shirtlessness).
What? Me? Perv--what? No. I don't know what you're talking about (:

Reviewer: Starwitness Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 08:51 am Title: Something More

I thought it was great just enough sunshine through the clouds too show that it's not all for nothing and that they can make it work. But I love how Jim just sorta knows when Pam needs him it's great.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 08:20 am Title: Something More

I liked it.  Everyone needs a break from all the drama.  You seem to be taking baby steps with them, and that is good.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 08:11 am Title: Something More

That was a nice relief from the angst and definitely not too sappy (for my taste at least). 

Reviewer: elliehalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 04:58 pm Title: Six Months Ago Is Not Today

Don't we all dream about Krasinski in a towel? God help those who don't . . . they're missing out.
I've been reading this for the past couple days, but have yet to review, so I'll just say I'm really enjoying this and keep it up.
(Any subsequent mentions of a certain actor in less-than-adequate clothing will hereby result in more reviews by me. Just sayin'. Seems to be a great motivator. It's the small things, y'know?)

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 02:42 pm Title: Six Months Ago Is Not Today

"But if I can’t right now, then that’s OK… So long as you’re here, in this room, safe. That’s all that matters to me.” Ah, Jim. He couldn't have shown his love any better than those words. Once again, he puts her happiness and safety above his need for her to love him the way he loves her. *sigh* Very well written. More, please?

Reviewer: Starwitness Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 02:00 pm Title: Six Months Ago Is Not Today

I love that she told him he doesn't know her anymore, a lot of things can change in 6 months and he needs to realize that but on the same note I hope that she realizes that she hurt him and that he has changed too. But then they find each other in the middle and jam fluff ensues :0 But for now bring on the angst ! (it's a very well written story) I give it a 10 !

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 11:31 am Title: Six Months Ago Is Not Today

That was a hard one to read.  Pam is at the worst and I can understand her not letting Jim just come sweep her away.  That being said I'm glad the way you ended this one and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 04:28 pm Title: So Exposed

really really love this chapter even though it was mainly just pam's pov...i really like how jim would not tak eno for an answer...can't wait for more

Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 03:32 pm Title: Never on the Face

I've said it before and ill say it again this so is awesome! You're such a good writer! Good Job. Can't wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: SkeetShruting Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 02:42 pm Title: So Exposed

I also liked that Pam finally opened up to Jim. And I agree that angry Jim is what I am also hoping for. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Starwitness Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 02:16 pm Title: So Exposed

I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter ! Sad jam is just heartbreaking :( But the emotion is great !

Reviewer: toyrundry Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 02:15 pm Title: So Exposed

GOOD
10 again. i'm glad pam opened up a little. i'm glad jim is listening. and i'm glad that you're a writer. lol

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 12:36 pm Title: So Exposed

that last paragraph really killed me.

guhhhhhh (:

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 08:52 am Title: So Exposed

Guh.  Every chapter makes my heart skip a beat. Just the thought of the abuse is difficult to fathom. 

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 08:52 am Title: So Exposed

Great update.  Thank you for having them talk things out.  I'm kinda hoping for an angry Jim in the near future!

Reviewer: Starwitness Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2009 10:36 pm Title: Never on the Face

Aww Pammy :sob: I think it's time to bust a cap jim !

Reviewer: toyrundry Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2009 06:42 pm Title: You Don't Know Anything At All

100% INTENSE
AHH.
poor pam. it's time to get the shotgun. and then end up on that awful show 'snapped'

lol snuggies are ugly though. i'd rather have him naked like.

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