Date: December 10, 2006 03:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, wow. Just all kinds ofwonderfully, painfully sad. Thanks.
Date: November 18, 2006 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I just stumbled upon this....gorgeous.
Date: October 02, 2006 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
beautiful.
Date: October 02, 2006 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Somehow, with each piece, you manage to break my heart and make me happy. Thank you for the time and effort.
Date: October 02, 2006 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a lovely story. You have such a way with words, I love how you compare how Jim feels with climbing a tree. And the last line was just perfect. So much hope and promise.
Date: October 02, 2006 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very lovely, well written. Thank you!
Date: October 02, 2006 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that was a lovely metaphor, and a lovely little story.
Date: October 02, 2006 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was so beautiful and haunting and absolute poetry, I swear. Just gorgeously written - you are so incredibly talented, I swear.
Date: October 02, 2006 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. the falling out of a tree idea worked so well! i could see it and feel it :) and i just loved the last line
Date: October 02, 2006 08:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I feel like I'm still holding my breath. This was so beautiful with such a lovely dream-like quality.
Date: October 02, 2006 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Your stories always bring tears to my eyes every single time - in the best possible of ways. Well done.
Date: October 02, 2006 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful images. Really lovely:)
Date: October 02, 2006 07:41 am Title: Chapter 1
What a gorgeous metaphor for the way she makes him feel. I love all of your stories and this is no exception. Wonderful job.
Date: October 02, 2006 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Just wonderful. Your stories are like soft exhalations: quiet, intimate, incredibly insightful. I just love them!
Date: October 02, 2006 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
What a lovely metaphor and such a sweet, hopeful ending. Jim deserves a soft landing.
Date: October 02, 2006 05:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this. The ending hurts a little.
Date: October 02, 2006 01:59 am Title: Chapter 1
That is just so poetic. Beautiful writing!
Date: October 02, 2006 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful.
Date: October 02, 2006 01:03 am Title: Chapter 1
So. Gorgeous. Your writing blows me away every time.