10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2010 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww, I love sweet Michael!
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2010 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww, I love sweet Michael!
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2010 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
I just signed up to MTT after reading this story, because all I can say is...wow. That was simply wonderful - a perfect mix of angst and loveliness. Your dialogue, particularly the unfinished sentences, perfectly captures the way Jim and Pam would talk to each other. I loved their dance.
Bravo, and thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2009 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! this was the most perfect ending to a perfect story. i loved jonathan, and what the hell, every single word of this chapter, i think this one and the previous were the best. congrats, girl7, this is an absolute masterpiece.
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2009 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
ahhhh. i just sighed an incredibly loud sigh. this is truly perfect. i love how funny yet romantic jim and pam are, it's just adorable. i'm having a really hard time here trying to explain how much i love this story. you said in this chapter how pam loved that jim had no idea how perfect he was? apply it this story. if you're married, pair how much i love this story to how much you love that person. ok, well maybe not that far, i don't think i'll marry this story, but really, this is just that good!
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2009 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
um... wow! i started drooling after pam said jim way sexy. that is the power you have on me to fall in love with your stories, and the way you portray jim and pam in them. amazing. uh. girl7? i think i'm in love with you writing, and i'm sorry it's weird for you to hear that, but i just needed you to know, once.
i started writing that in the google search bar as i was half-way done reading this chapter. but wow. this is truly amazing. i don't think i've ever been so delighted and privileged to read a story before. so thank you.
and god, i want a jim! especially the one from this story. *sigh*
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2009 11:52 am Title: Chapter 2
wow. go michael. i love how serious he can be sometimes. sadly, though how it only happens once a year! i really wish this scene had been in the actual episode. and i don't think i've ever said that before to someone, so i seriously mean it. great job, and i can't wait to see what happens next!
9 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2009 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
darn, this is so well written! i love the story idea, how you've taken from what actually has happened, and used a little bit of a creative license. great job with this. i do have to say i got a little confused with all the new scenes starting all the time. are these flashbacks, or all in a consecutive order. please let me know!
great new (to me at least) story, girl7, i love it and can't wait to see where it's headed!
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2009 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pam had tried to explain to him the verb squee the night before.
He was fairly certain there was a squee somewhere in the inflection of his voice when he said good morning to his brother.
hee! i love that!
8 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2009 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
don't get me wrong, i love, love, LOVE this.... but the entire exchange with michael was SO out of character for him. i know he has had his occasional sweet/smart moments... but they never last that long. (twss?)
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2009 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
I wish that didnt end lol. GUH.
Date: September 15, 2008 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think the "dance" that Pam and Jim were playing w/ their words fit beautifully with them actually dancing.
Date: September 15, 2008 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love all post-Merge stories. I think it's "fun" (not sure if it is the right word) ... but I think it's fun that Pam finds Josh attractive. I also like the flasbacks intertwined w/ the wedding.
Date: July 30, 2008 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like how you added in Jonathan. And I love this fic- my weakness is for fics that take a canon moment (that doesn't necessarily do much in the show) and use it as a jumping-off point for something entirely different but in character. Or close to it ;)
I liked your Karen... you portrayed the K/J relationship well and in a way that followed the ep, but you didn't make her she-devil!Karen.
And Jim and Pam ending up together... well, that's just icing on the cake. They're the one fic pairing in any fandom I have where it doesn't sound unrealistic to have 'I love you' pillow talk- they're just too sweet together.
This might be an older fic, but it's a goodie for sure.
Date: July 21, 2008 08:23 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG I love Sensitive Michael who can be tactless at exactly the right moment sometimes. You 'did' him perfectly (that's what she said...).
Author's Response:
Wow, it was strange to get a review for this oldie! (Strange but welcome.) :o)
I, too, am a sucker for Sensitive Michael -- glad you enjoyed him here! (That is also what she said.) :o)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 09, 2008 05:58 am Title: Chapter 5
excellent as usual. I love a happy ending.
Author's Response: Why, thank you! I love angst, but yessh, I love a happy ending, too. ...And that is, of course, what she said. :o)
Date: December 08, 2007 12:03 am Title: Chapter 5
I heart Jonathan!
And this story, clearly.
Author's Response:
Okay, it has taken me no less than two months to respond to your review. :o) SO sorry!
Glad you love Jonathan and the story! :o)
Date: June 17, 2007 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
So I've literally spent the past 2 and half hours reading all of your stories. They are SO good. I mean, just.. really great. I just wanted you to know that.. you're an amazing writer and I cannot wait to read more from you. Oh, and thanks for giving me the opportunity to not sit through golf. Hee.
Author's Response: Oh wow -- thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked them; it's always really a treat to get a new review of an older work. :o) Thanks again for taking the time to review!
Date: March 10, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Jonathon...always in the best places. Hooray!!!!
Author's Response:
Heh - yes, and in fact, it turns out that he's what's referred to as a "Mary Sue" (i.e. a character who sort of appears to move the plot along but isn't fully developed) - which is not, I hear, a good thing. (I had no idea about this when I created him.) And I can definitely see the criticism there, though I've tried to round him out more in later fics -- because yeah, for a while there, it was as if he had absolutley nothing else to do but sit around and wait for Jim to call. :o) I'm glad that you like him, though; it's nice to hear.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 10, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love compasionate Michael. You're definetly my favorite author here. Really great work!!!
Author's Response: I love him, too - partly because I have such an affection for the character, and partly because I have a not-so-secret little crush on Steve Carrell. :o) Glad you're enjoying this!
Date: January 19, 2007 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy, that was nothing short of brilliant. Very hot and very loving. Great style and overall feeling. And the waking up in the middle of the night bit - priceless, both in the idea and in the form. You so are one of my favourite writers.
Date: January 19, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it. It's heartbreaking and I love it.
Date: January 11, 2007 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my God they would SO be JUST LIKE THIS! I can't decide if this is incredibly freaking hot or just so adorable I want to die.
Seriously: you've got a good thing going here. You're playing with the idea that talking *around* sex (not even about it) and flirting and teasing and little things like leaning in a doorway (VERY hot) are more erotic than hardcore description of sex itself. Nice. I wish more authors did this.
And, again: spot-on characterization. Gad.
Date: December 28, 2006 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
I've been reading stories all night and I have to say... this is been one of the best! This is the stuff I crave!! Ahh haha, but yeah, it was really sweet and I think that you got a lot of their dialouge pretty perfect! Thanks so much!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2006 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
i just read all of the chapters. seriously that was the best story i have ever read in my entire life. if i could i would give you a huge hug right now for writing that amazing story. really i was dying the whole time thinking "whats gonna happen next?" so best story ever. no really it was