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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2009 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Now I see why Pam's dad needed a robe - yuk! I loved the Jim and Pam parts of the story - so sweet and romantic. Nice job!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2009 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

This makes me love the episode even more. I love that aspect of their relationship, and understanding it more, beautiful. And it makes me want a Jim even more. Because even with all his faults, he really does love Pam with ever fiber of his being, and that is just... makes me happy.

(Plus, I think you totally captured Pam's emotions, because its not an easy time!)

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Man, and I thought I cried from watching the episode! This was an amazing read.

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for filling in last night's episode. :-)

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice plausable backstory, well done.

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow that was just amazing. I can totally see the conversations going that way. The only part I disagree with is in the episode, Jim did say Peter and Pam's mum are talking to others about their relationship, just not to each other, so I think he would have been more open in this story around Jim and Pam anyway. Nevertheless, great piece :)

Reviewer: fashion_show_at_lunch Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww *swoon* Very cool backstory. I loved this subplot in the episode. Good job office writers! and good job to you too. :)

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

That is wonderful. I love the way you filled in all the blanks.
I really loved that little scene from the episode. I thougth Pam was going to come in all angry and sad at Jim, but it didn't fail to leave my heart warmed.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

guhhh, I thought I was the only one who saw the 'temple kiss'.

soooo gooooood (:

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am so glad that there are people out there with great imaginations who can fill in the blanks for me. This was great, thanks!

Don't you just love him?? Sigh.

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

love it :D

Reviewer: pam_beesly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved what you had Jim say to Peter about his feelings for Pam. I can totally see that happening on the show. We should all be as lucky as Pam, especially the Pam in your story. Excellent job.

Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww that was so cute, I loved this story

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

You captured it, nicely.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Binx, this was great.  It really rang true for me.  I hope we haven't seen the last of this story line. 

Reviewer: emjohnson03 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1

That was perfect.

This is my first comment on a story and I just had to say somrthing.

What a great flow and so true to their voices.

Thanks for writing that so quickly!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Guh, wonderful. I assumed Jim's parents were divorced though, from what he said when he he was like "that's my parents and pam's"

Reviewer: WhatAWaste Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 02, 2009 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww. I was hoping someone would have something posted regarding Jim's take on all of this, including that conversation. Good job and thank you!!

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