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Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2010 07:28 pm Title: The Christmas Party

Well, this makes me feel nostalgic.  Nostalgic and old actually.  No, make that mostly old.  Possibly entirely old.

I loved your Dwight logs.  They remind me of some of my relatives.

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2010 02:01 am Title: Jim is Acting Weird

hey whats wrong i can watch the seocn part of the story!!! only the author notes and chaper end notes, but not the story.
could u upload it again

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2010 01:59 am Title: The Christmas Party

woohoho, i cant wait to see what hes planing. this is goint to be gooood

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2010 03:10 am Title: The Christmas Party

Oh, I'm really enjoying this and Dwight's daily log...priceless!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2010 05:57 am Title: Jim is Acting Weird

I'm very excited to see you're back and I can't wait for the next installment of this. Great set up.

Reviewer: ELiXiR2722 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2010 12:55 am Title: The Christmas Party

i'm liking this story a lot. hope to see more soon!

Reviewer: Sarah42 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2010 08:23 pm Title: Jim is Acting Weird

You should definitely come all the way back ;P Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2010 05:38 pm Title: Jim is Acting Weird

I remember this story and PLEASE, please continue! I'm intrigued as to what Dwight has up his sleeve. What is Jim going to do? Pam? The mule?? So many questions, so little answers!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2010 01:49 pm Title: Jim is Acting Weird

You're back!  I remember this story, and I'm thrilled that you're continuing with it, GITC.  I can perfectly envision Jim pacing around the office "like a pinball bouncing from desk to desk."  Great visual.  I hope you feel inspired to update again soon.  I've missed you!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2010 01:48 pm Title: Jim is Acting Weird

Oh, I'm so excited to see a story from you!  Great premise.  I like how you're including all three viewpoints.

BTW, the mule is unFAZED not unPHASED.

Reviewer: elliehalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 07:32 pm Title: The Christmas Party

OMG!
I spent all day reading NBBM yesterday (which was AMAZING, by the way, I had a total squee at the end during which my mother had to cover her ears), and then today LOOK WHAT I FIND!
Dwight's farm log is extremely priceless. I bet if you typed that up, you could sell it on eBay and make a fortune.
Looking forward to more (:

Reviewer: SarahPlainandTall Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 07:26 pm Title: The Christmas Party

What a relief to be back in familiar territory. Jim secretly loves Pam, and Dwight is being crazy and calculating. That's comforting after this week's episode and all of the craziness at Dunder Mifflin lately. As usual, you created a wonderful story. I thoroughly enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: Corking Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 04:58 pm Title: The Christmas Party

I'm not really a big fan of InternalMonologue!Jim, but the second half of this just killed me!! I laughed so hard at "Mule #4" that I almost peed. And I love that Dwight numbers his enemies, it's so great. And why is Phyllis even on that list? She's basically helpless.

I'm excited to see where this goes!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 01:16 pm Title: The Christmas Party

Just when I thought Thursday couldn't get any happier, this little gem comes long!  As usual, a novel idea from you, GITC.  Looking forward to following this. 

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 01:05 pm Title: The Christmas Party

wow. you channel Dwight very well: Mose's health status, the need for Mule #4's attitude adjustment, his notes on his enemies and the projected bed time all had me giggling.

continue?



Author's Response: I'm so glad you giggled over Dwight's log. I'm working on some Dwight for the next chapter and he's fun to write. Thanks for reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: czarag00 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 12:49 pm Title: The Christmas Party

Oohh! This is going to be good! I'm excited for the next update! Loved Dwight's journal entry!

<3



Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm going to try to have the next installment up ASAP.

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 11:34 am Title: The Christmas Party

I've often wondered what would happen if Dwight had gotten the card out of the giftbox. I really enjoyed Nobody's Business But Mine, and I'm really looking forward to reading this!

Author's Response: Thanks BT. I really appreciate your kind words and you taking the time to leave a review.

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 11:32 am Title: The Christmas Party

so by angst you mean HILARITY, right?? :D This looks like it's gonna be good :)

Author's Response: Of course. Angst always means hilarity. Thanks for your review. I hope the story lives up to your expectations.

Reviewer: Liv Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 11:16 am Title: The Christmas Party

I actually always wondered what would've happened if Dwight had gotten that card. Watching the episode, I kinda thought that Jim should be more concerned about THAT than disappointed that Pam didn't receive the gift. I mean--it's DWIGHT. LOL

Author's Response:

Exactly. I've wondered why Jim didn't try to get it away from Dwight...of course it wouldn't have been as dramatic and significant, but still...don't give Dwight ammunition!!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 10:27 am Title: The Christmas Party

OMG, if there's anything worse than confiding in the world's worst confidant, it's have a Dwight Schrute know your deepest secrets. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Especially if you are Dwight's #1 enemy :)  Thanks for your review! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: JAMhands Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2009 10:21 am Title: The Christmas Party

I really enjoyed this, and I'm looking forward to more. Dwight's log was cracking my up. Excellent work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I've only written Dwight once before and it's fun to try to get into his head. I appreciate your review. Thanks and I hope the rest of the story doesn't let you down.

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