8 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2010 09:32 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
wow. this was really good.
listening to the song while reading gave it a little extra something :)
and i must say, i like jim with a little cursing. pottymouth jim is sexy (; although which jim isnt.
so i'm definitely gonna think of this and smile every time i hear that song now (: great job!
Date: April 30, 2009 03:18 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
Loved, loved, loved it. I never get sick of reading different versions of what these two characters were thinking during this chapter in their story. Well done.
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2009 03:10 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
You hit it out of the ball park again!! I loved reading Jim's POV here, and especially loved:
"He was ready for the interview, completely mentally prepared when he realized who the one too many was. And he realized that being with the other was where he needed to be."
Awesome job!!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2009 01:58 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
lovely.
plain ol, lovely (:
Date: April 30, 2009 11:14 am Title: My Hopes Are So High
This is so awesome. The first chapter was good,but the second was even better, and I have to admit that I was skeptical at the idea of adding to a one shot (which in my opinion rarely ends well) but you pulled it off beautifully. It probably doesn't hurt that I don't think I'll ever get enough first date fic either. ;) It's lovely the way it stands now, but if you wanted to continue this, I would be very eager to read it.
Date: April 30, 2009 06:17 am Title: My Hopes Are So High
Such a treat. Happy to read Jim's point of view.
Date: April 29, 2009 10:21 pm Title: My Hopes Are So High
Absolutely LOVE this line:
Maybe she’d throw him against the door and kiss him like she meant it and let him know that the past was the past and that her future was his.
9 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2009 08:43 pm Title: Like She Meant It
"Her fourth first date. With a man she'd longed for since she was with the man who'd been her first, first date."
What a great line. I loved this look at their first date - from Pam's preparations, wondering if she should dress like Karen to the shock and awe (loved that, too!) on Jim's face. Great job!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2009 12:02 pm Title: Like She Meant It
LSKDFJSDLKJsdlfgg.
Yeah, you know, I still love you.
I realize that maybe me a little creepy (LOL) but authors of consistently squee-worthy stories deserve it.
(Um, that would be you, fyi. Clearing up any confusion.)
Author's Response: Oh ellie, you make me blush :) I just can't help it - I love me some squee-ness lol
10 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2009 07:18 pm Title: Like She Meant It
That was wow, I LOVED it, like totally loved it. Would you continue?:)
Author's Response: With all of these great reviews, you guys are making me rethink this whole one-shot business lol.. Let me think about it - there's a few ideas brewing up in the ole' cranium that might need to be expressed via JAM fic :)
Date: April 25, 2009 06:42 pm Title: Like She Meant It
Stjoe, this was such as delicious as the kiss you describe. Really adorable :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Nan :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2009 06:23 pm Title: Like She Meant It
oh, wow (:
Author's Response: Mixedbreed, I think I love your reviews :)
Date: April 25, 2009 05:36 pm Title: Like She Meant It
I know you wrote this as a oneshot, but honestly it would make for some great vignettes with lines from the song. You should think about it ;)
Author's Response: I know, I know... There are 2 more lines that I know would be great as starting points... I'll see what I can do :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2009 11:13 am Title: Like She Meant It
This was great!! I just saw an awesome Jim/Pam youtube video set to "Hands Down" if anyone's interested: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TtTsJhVyJi0&feature=channel_page
Author's Response: That video just made me squee. Wow. Thanks for posting it!! :)
Date: April 25, 2009 10:12 am Title: Like She Meant It
*sigh* That was always my favorite line of that song, and let me tell you--many of my high school night were spent laying in the bed of my best friend's truck and the two of us talking about how awesome it would be if we could find a guy who stood at our door when their hands on our waist and kissed us like they meant it. I'm so so so glad that Jim and Pam got that moment. Beautiful (as always), I just adore everything you write!
And, also, I totally meant this review.
Author's Response: Aww tuna, that was a sweet story! Thanks for the review :)