10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
that was great. i understand how they are kinda awe-strucked by the fact they're pregnant, but still... they seem so cautious, tentitive, hesitant... i think they're overthinking this.
it'll be okay though, i have faith in you! great job with this story, i'm sure it's a challenge at times, but you're really doing a great job!
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow! that was so well done. i didn't know it was possible to make that so realistic about to tv characters. but then again, this IS the office, and anything is possible with the amazing writers they have, and the actors and actresses who portray the characters they have brought to life.
i think that was incredible, and can't wait to see what their reactions are. I LOVE JIM so much, that he is so supportive for pam, and constantly thinks of her first. what a sweetie. he can have my number anytime!
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 09:40 am Title: Chapter 6
gorgeous (:
Date: June 29, 2009 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Now THAT was good. And fun. And sweet. And sexy. Drunk!Jim is adorable, and I love it when Pam....ahem...overcomes her hesitant nature. Awesome chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 06:33 am Title: Chapter 6
I am bowing down to you right now. That has to be one of the most awesome chapters EVER. I love how worried Pam was about drunk Jim, and that he ended up being the cutest HOTTEST drunk ever... and Pam having never being on top and the whole thing about her being so self concious about it - it was just PERFECT.
I adore drunk Jim and the smut was perfect. I love how he just opened his heart to her aw.
I LOVE THIS SERIES.
Date: June 29, 2009 05:45 am Title: Chapter 6
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Another one! Yanana, you are on a roll, baby! I so love long chaps when they're this good. It's a real pleasure to keep reading and reading. No matter what your friends say, I love that you decided it would be Pam's first time as a cowgirl ; ) LOOOOOVE that. Also, how much do I love your drunken Jim? So very much. Great idea to have Pam fretting, not knowing what to expect of Jim after a night of drinking. "I can barely believe I have you now." Guh. Be still my heart. Feel free to keep churning out long chaps!
Date: June 28, 2009 07:39 am Title: Chapter 5
I like the concept... Jim is always so caring...it's very cute! And the contacts still in the case.... I've done that!! hahaha... it tickled me to no end! Great job...update soon!
Date: June 27, 2009 10:55 am Title: Chapter 5
happyhappyhappyhappyhappyhappyhappyhappyhappyhappyhappy :) I'm so happy! I've been waiting for this, yanana. And to hear that you like where the next chap is going makes me even more excited.
I think this is totally realistic...and totally romantic, too. I love how your Pam and Jim are acting and reacting, how they balance each other. Their conversation about what they want to do, whether they want to keep the baby, was so touching. The relief was palpable, as is their love for each other. Can't wait for more...but I'll be patient, as always ; )
Date: June 27, 2009 10:45 am Title: Chapter 5
This story = ♥
Also, I think I ruptured something laughing at "I just like to clean when I'm... you know--"
"Knocked up?"
10 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2009 09:29 am Title: Chapter 5
Amazing. I have fallen in love with this story. I can't wait to see where you go next =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2009 08:26 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww I loved it :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2009 08:19 am Title: Chapter 5
adorableeeeeeeee (:
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2009 02:19 am Title: Chapter 4
*cough cough*
HELLOOOOOOO you must update this like right this minute, mmkay? :)
This was so cute and beautiful and JUST how I can imagine them behaving if this had happened then!!!!!!!
Date: June 23, 2009 06:04 am Title: Chapter 4
beautiful! I like the uncertainty of jim and pam. not that NBC jims reaction wasn't great... but yours felt more natural great work!!
Date: June 23, 2009 06:04 am Title: Chapter 4
beautiful! I like the uncertainty of jim and pam. not that NBC jims reaction wasn't great... but yours felt more natural great work!!
10 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2009 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this, your story is so cute and sexy and sweet. Just the right mix of goodies. I gotta get back into writing some more jam. you inspire me!
Date: June 08, 2009 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
::sigh:: they're so...great. I love that you had them just go to sleep. I mean honestly -- what the heck else are you going to do? I would totally have to rest my head for awhile after that news.
Still really enjoying this! Can't wait to see what happens!
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2009 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
awesome (:
Date: June 08, 2009 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
You're doing a really good job with conveying Pam & Jim's emotions and confusion. There is a fair amount of tense-jumping. Might want to pay more attention to that in the next chapters.
Date: June 08, 2009 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
yay faster updates = a happier me :]
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2009 11:42 am Title: Chapter 4
This is so interesting, it really highlights that no matter how much they went through to get to this point, they aren't realistically going to be completely comfortable or definitive about this relationship. Great job!
Date: June 08, 2009 08:56 am Title: Chapter 4
Talk about tugging at the old heartstrings. I think you captured the reaction of this new couple in this particular situation so well, yanana--utterly dazed but still loving. Love. This. Story.
Date: May 26, 2009 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
It is interesting to see the idea of a pregnancy much earlier in the relationship, when they still have the awkwardness present. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see how it goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. =)
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2009 08:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Amazing :)
Author's Response: Thanks. =)
Date: May 26, 2009 06:51 am Title: Chapter 3
I love this story. Please tell me you will be updating very soon. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them. Very, very interesting.
-Hann
Author's Response: Next chapter will be here soonish. Thanks for the review. =)