10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2009 03:07 pm Title: Clinging to a Preserver
Excellent chapter, JAMhands!!
And he had clung to that buoy all night long, bobbing along on waves of hope that he had dared not ride before. ~ Loved this!
Thanks so much for the update!!! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2009 01:44 pm Title: Clinging to a Preserver
lovely (:
Date: June 05, 2009 10:16 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
This is great ... and I'm so pleased you didn't make her run from one to another. She does need that time on her own. Loving your writing (I'm reading all of your stories at present!).
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like the ones that transition too quickly from Roy to Jim. She would need a little time to mourn that relationship. Thanks so much for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2009 04:29 am Title: Kicking for the Surface
Fantastic chapter, JAMhands! Awwww, poor Pam. I feel so bad for her. Looking forward to an update. :)
Author's Response: Thanks BBoJ ;)
10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2009 07:45 pm Title: Who Would You Save First?
This is a wonderful story! I hope you are able to update soon.
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2009 06:56 am Title: Kicking for the Surface
Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thanks Liv!
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2009 08:19 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
ahhhh! please write more! this is great!
although pam is annoying me a bit right now, but that's exactly what pam would do! go you! (:
Author's Response: Hah! Thank you. She'll get better, I promise!
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2009 07:56 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
I usually try to leave comments for every chapter of a multi-part story, but I was too caught up in this to stop! I love your characterizations, here, your use of details we got later in the "real" timeline (Jim's tendency to burst forth unexpectedly, for example), and your deft use of sentence structure and word choice. This is an AU that feels real, because we know that in many respects, this is exactly what happened, emotionally if not in the actions. Lovely, lovely.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for such a lovely review. I am so happy that you are enjoying it, I love trying to crawl into the characters' heads.
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2009 05:04 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
Ahhhhh. Love this so much! I love the Jim and Pam moment when he picked her up. Gah. So goooood. Great work.
Author's Response: Ahhh. So happy that my owner is happy! Thanks Junkie!
Date: May 30, 2009 08:25 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
Another fine chap, JAMhands, full of tension and uncertainty. Great job describing Pam's departure, Roy's cluelessness and Jim's anxiety. Looking forward to the next installment already!
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! I wanted them to all be in different places in this chapter, so I'm glad that it came through for you! I appreciate you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2009 05:55 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
wow (:
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2009 03:21 pm Title: Kicking for the Surface
This is amazing. I can't wait to see where you go with it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll get going on it, my owner is a slave driver!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2009 10:21 pm Title: Going Down for the Third Time in a Sea of Tulle
OMG Roy is a jerk, this is amazing, you are amazing, I must read chapter three like right this minute lol.
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2009 10:16 am Title: Going Down for the Third Time in a Sea of Tulle
This story rocks, JAMhands! It's riveting. I don't know how I missed the first chap, but what a treat to have two chaps to read in a row! Woo hoo! :)
Date: May 22, 2009 09:22 am Title: Going Down for the Third Time in a Sea of Tulle
Man...stupid, stupid Roy. I sure hope Pam is brave enough to call it quits for good. Update soon, I'm enjoying this story a whole lot!
Date: May 22, 2009 08:42 am Title: Going Down for the Third Time in a Sea of Tulle
Beautiful chapter. Roy is a putz.
I especially enjoyed the Jim/Oscar exchange and the way the men most surely would have bolted away at their first opportunity.
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2009 10:44 pm Title: Going Down for the Third Time in a Sea of Tulle
I love how this is going so far! Keep writing!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2009 08:47 pm Title: Going Down for the Third Time in a Sea of Tulle
You are on a roll, girl! This is great! I absolutely love the whole thing. I cannot wait for the next chapter when Jim gets back from lunch.
I hope you have LOTS AND LOTS of chapters planned out!
Date: May 21, 2009 07:14 pm Title: Going Down for the Third Time in a Sea of Tulle
I love how this is turning out so differently! I love that Jim is in Pam's head and she escaped. AND Meredith in this chapter was excellent! Great work!
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2009 06:20 pm Title: Going Down for the Third Time in a Sea of Tulle
Awww, poor Pam, poor Jim. Stupid, stupid Roy. Meredith was hysterical! Thanks so much for a fantastic chapter, JAMhands!
Date: May 11, 2009 12:06 pm Title: Who Would You Save First?
The conversation was beautifully done and the idea of Jim pulling the hat over Michael's ears just made me smile.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love throwing little things like the hat in there.
10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2009 07:44 am Title: Who Would You Save First?
Wow, Jamhands, that was an amazing chapter! I could so picture it all. Looking forward to more. Thanks so much!
Author's Response: THanks my favorite little JamBag! Hee! That sounded dirty!
Date: May 10, 2009 06:35 pm Title: Who Would You Save First?
OK, I'm hooked. Please write quickly.
Author's Response: Thank you! More to come!
Date: May 10, 2009 05:05 pm Title: Who Would You Save First?
That was just... I don't even know. I go away to sunny, 95 degree Vegas for a week, and I come home to this, and it makes being back in rainy, cold Boston absolutely worth it.
“Nah, it’s just, I’m not…” he stammered. to "There you go…” he muttered under his breath.
That? That entire scene? That sums up every single thing I prayed for watching TO on my couch that night. How Jim just looked at her on the boat, and you knew exactly what he was thinking... wow. That was awesome. Please continue this soon - I'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: Sit back, St. Joe, there will be more! Thanks!
Date: May 10, 2009 03:29 pm Title: Who Would You Save First?
Wow.
Author's Response: Thanks Tuna!