Date: October 08, 2006 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I see you answered my question already. Seriously, great job.
Author's Response: I may or may not have spent the weekend holed up with my Buffy DVDs. Thanks for the comments! I don't think I'm going to continue -- I was definitely thinking oneshot. Oh, and thanks for organizing the TWoP recaps, they were great!
10 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 07:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Just stumbled across this story. Like the point of view and Pam's realizations. Will you continue?
BTW, is the title a Buffy reference? If so, it get high points form me. :)
8 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this a lot. This sounds like her- matter-of-fact on the surface, with a lot of emotion churning underneath.
6 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, yay, I'm glad someone is exploring how difficult it must have been for Pam to deal with Jim's really heavy declaration, and making so many huge changes in her own life. And is the title a Buffy reference? Nice!
Author's Response: It's totally a Buffy reference! Yea, I watch too much television. Thanks for the comments.
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, great job for your first fic! it was very well written, and I like the first person point of view.
" I have a reminder in my closet every morning and on my plate every afternoon of the mistake I made" is a great line!
I'm looking forward to more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: October 07, 2006 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting POV. It leaves me wanting more and I'm not sure if you intend to continue but what will Pam do next? Favorite line -"a man shouldn't get dumped without pants on". Words to live by really!
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Written very well as Pam
8 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
"He hit me with an emotional intensity that I wasn’t prepared for at all." - I haven't seen this thought explored a lot, so it's great that you included it here.